hey great story would you please consider adding a couple of chapters to it enjoyed heaps I kindda like the fluff lol

Very sweet.

I've never heard of Ty Luki but it's alot better than I thought. Great story!

i totally agree with this crack pairing, tylee and suki would make a very hot couple

Oh my Gawd! xDD First time I've ever gone into the Avatar section and gone looking for a fic (normally I just look up authors and go through their Story and Author Favorites) and what do I find? Your fic. It was really good. I normally don't ship crack seriously, but they would definitely be an interesting couple.

Good job, you managed to capture their characters really well! :D

Eh? Never seen this pairing before... It doesn't fit the fields personalities, at all. Don't mind the les, but these two, just no. I like the writing style though.