Best AiGrimm fic I have read so job bud!

How absolutely wonderful for you to have written something so explicit. I shall now spend the rest the of the night re-reading this over and over again. ;) Not being creepy at all.

Wow, amazing. One of the best fics AizenxGrimmjow I ever read )

That was fantastic! I loved it! You write so well!

I love it! Grimm's a new pet kitty!

Powerful, intense and had a lot of good lines- I really like your writing style too!

:O

Write !

Hmmm. This isn't normally the kind of scene I enjoy, and I don't usually pair Aizen and Grimmjow (although they both are sexy beasts). But you've done an excellent job here. Your elegant writing style makes an interesting contrast with the violent content, and I enjoyed the chapter. There are numerous little details I found especially good.

I really enjoyed the way you depicted Grimmjow's transformation and how both he and Aizen reacted to it.

Grimmjow exploring his new body was wonderful. Especially Aizen watching him. :D Plus Grimmy's response when he saw Aizen.

I loved this line: "Perhaps I didn't explain myself properly." Aizen approached Grimmjow, moving like a shark in deep water, his gaze coolly fixed upon Grimmjow. "I am here to take the throne of heaven for myself. You, my pet, will have the honor of sitting at my feet."

And this: "Aizen's finger ran up Grimmjow's shaft like the cool side of a knife."

I also liked the descriptions of Grimmy's eyes and Aizen's reaction to them.

Yes, there were a few typos and grammar/spelling errors that it would be good to fix, given that the quality of your writing is otherwise excellent.

Thanks for writing this story and I hope you continue, and/or write more Aizen/Grimmjow.

yes! you updated! and it was yummy! yay~ ;D

i like how Aizen seems so attracted to Grimm. but I wonder if he'll bore of him like the others. noo! i hope not. and I dout he will! i mean, come on! who gets bored of Grimmjow! he's fucking hot! XD and adorable ;3 when you make him! ;D

i hope this isn't the end of this great fanfic!

COOLIO CHAPTER! :D

grimmjow now has 6 on his back! :3

i likey how you started it off by him experimenting his new body! ;P

AWEZOME STORY!

KEEP IT UPPPP! :D XD

Ha, the ending made me smile, although I would be sad if you stopped here. I hope you keep on going! I enjoyed this quiet a bit!

Well. I really liked this. What an atmosphere, thick and menacing... and so beautifully described.

Aizen is scary and evil (as he should be) and I loved your descriptions of Grimmjow the adjuchas and his first encounter with Aizen. "It was a survivor... strong. Its reiatsu had the striking taste of the forest after a rainstorm. It was clear and strong, untainted by the rot of regression that plagued the weaker adjuchas, destined to return to their gillian form. Aizen sat up, intrigued."

And I loved these lines, which sum up so well the relationship between Aizen and Grimmjow:

"If there was, Grimmjow had just met him. Something incalculable and incomprehensible. Something worlds beyond that horizon that Grimmjow had only just now dreamed of touching.

Something impossible to reach.

But that didn't mean he wasn't going to try."

this seems interesting! :) though, Aizen scares me, always did.../cough/ him having his own...personal toys and all. haha! well i wanna see more of this! :)

I really liked it! I hope you write more.

Very promising, and I say if people harass you about the incorrect details, blow it off. It gets old reading about the same recurrence of events and this is a fanfiction so you have free reign! Whoo ATL (alternate time line)!