Reviews for Hurdles
Tiggy318 chapter 15 . 5/11/2015
Nice story ! ! !
Guest chapter 3 . 10/26/2014
i'm stil not clear on this. did she get raped or not?
Guest chapter 3 . 11/4/2013
Love the fic but this was a bit confusing, after Bella met up with James he obviously knocked her out and Raped her and then shoved her into the trunk of her truck, ok clear so far, but how did Edward know where to find her or even that she needed help in the first place? Maybe he realised the place they were having their date was closed, but if this was the case why didn't he get suspicious when Bella first told him?
madehoney chapter 8 . 2/28/2012
I'm sorry I really understand that this is fiction, but this is too much, first she shouldn't had gotten pregnant, it's not possible, second after a trauma like that she should had a miscarriage , there is not way a fetus would have resisted the stress specially since as your words she was shoot on her lower abdomen...

It was a great idea for a story but got way twisted on the way, what a shame
madehoney chapter 5 . 2/28/2012
are you seriously making her pregnant with that monsters? B hasn't suffered enough to know raise her rapist's baby?
darkangel0212 chapter 1 . 2/9/2012
keep up the good work on your stories
Topaz18 chapter 15 . 1/20/2012
*smirk* LOVE IT! It's fantabulous! (fantastic fabulous) I love how all the chapters are so long!
ShelbyCullen4e chapter 15 . 1/13/2012
This is by far one of my favorite stories...I deffinatly think you should do an epi. Do one for in the future to show how maddy is doing and if edward and bella have any kids of there own together and if it was another multiple pregnancy...hint hint maybe you should do a sequal...I WOULD LOVE IT!
may96 chapter 15 . 1/8/2012
I love this story! Is there more? I hope there's more. I'm sorry you're computer doesn't like to save. mine is the same. always copy all of the text and paste it into an email or something. then you have backup
Sunshine72 chapter 15 . 1/5/2012
I loved it! I can't wait to see the epilouge. I hope Maddy makes it. I loved the names.
cullengirl08 chapter 15 . 1/5/2012
I'm so happy that they didn't lose baby C after all. What a happy surprise that way. And I would love to see an epilogue or any future outtakes. Just raising 3 triplets alone is a story in an of itself. hehe. I've loved this story from the beginning.
babybaby15 chapter 15 . 1/4/2012
Another great chapter I loved it! Maybe something into Maddy's time in the NICU
alc1002 chapter 15 . 1/4/2012
Good chapter
detsinbaby chapter 15 . 1/4/2012
4 a futer take bella needs 2 have edward baby
babybaby15 chapter 14 . 1/3/2012
Another great chapter I loved it
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