that was really well-written! it seemed very real, and i really, really liked their brotherhood bond:)

That was cute! I love Bill and Charlie moments xD

Very sweet. I really like it. Good job!

It was quite funny following Bills thoughts and I think you did it in a great way, the way his thoughts went back and forth.

I've always seen Bill and Charlie as really close so I liked that you made Bill upset that he wasn't a part of Charlies sexuality.

The dialouge was nice.

Great job, and keep writing!

Chemistry Cat

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Pretty pretty please

I love that what’s really bothering Bill isn’t that Charlie’s gay so much, rather that Charlie hasn’t told him about him, and the hurt that he might have told his friends before him.

The chicken chase is hilarious (but then, I don’t know much about chickens either!).

“Do u know him at all anymore” – I like the humanity of this line, because so many people find appoint where they suddenly realize they’re not as close to their siblings as they once were, the point where they realize that friends are more their confidantes than their own siblings. And then in direct contrast, Charlie noticing straight away that Bill is acting strangely, even though they’ve been apart for a year. Love it.

Charlie wanting Bill’s approval, re going to Romania is sweet, showing that in some sense, Charlie is still the “little brother.”

I like the Character-study of Percy, it’s an interesting little aside, showing how different he is to the rest of the Weasley’s.

And the boy-talk at the end is funny, especially the fling with Mr Millwood.

Nice fic (although it could use a bit of tighter editing, re; tenses).

Hmmm...I don't normally think of Charlie as gay, but this was just so awesomely well written and really sweet, and you know what I really enjoyed it! :D

It is very cute. I've read this a few times now :L

wotcher,

great story, funny too. i love the chickens ;) strategising against them ! LOL

i really wanted to know who Charlie fancied. :( oh wells.

thanks,

Tegan :)

Great start! I really liked the interactions between all of them, and the plot is interesting, too. I hope you continue! :)

Charlie's gay?...Why does that not surprise me...xD

I think your plot was really awesome because it had a twist and a gay guy in (xD) as well as being full of Bill and Charlie's adorable relationship. I loved Bill in this fic, and your characterisation was generally excellent. I'm a sucker for bromance, so I say job very well done.

Really good story :) please carry on with it :):):):):):):):):):):):)

This is really well done. You write the interactions with the younger kids really well, and I love how you've written Bill and Charlie's relationship and the awkwardness between them when there's a secret between them. Good story.