| Reviews for Unwritten |
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AudiLion chapter 1 . 7/3/2013 I likes some and others need a little work though all good! |
Eliphant chapter 1 . 10/11/2011 I've always loved your work (you're like one of the few current TD authors that actually write stories with good grammar and stuff). I know you said you won't continue any story but I love the idea of the whole younger Courtney and older Duncan fic. It'd be great if you rewrote it. (No pressure, really) And you have a twin brother? AND you're a Gemini? You don't know how badly I wished me and my twin sister were Geminis when I was little, you're lucky. That's cool though that you're a fellow twin. I've only met a couple pairs and I think it's be totally cool if my like bff was a twin bc then we could like compare twin stuff, you get my drift? Ha well you don't have to PM me or anything and become my twin friend, it's fine. SO anyways, keep up the good writing and have a wonderful day! :) |
tessdebelle chapter 1 . 8/27/2011 Hi, big fan. Yeah, that was cheesy. I'm sure you get messages all the time, like, 'When are you gonna finish these?' or 'I want more!', and all that crap. But I thought that I loved 101 Questions so much (I'm a totally Duncan-Courtney obbsessor) that maybe you'd let me finish it. Post it on my page, credit the first part as yours, even mark it as a collaboration. Thanks! -Warriorgirl111 |
CarmillaD chapter 1 . 8/3/2011 OK, my review is going to be neatly organized by drabble _: "For The Last Time" Yeouch, the A/N kinda broke my little TxG shipper heart because it brought me back to reality, BUT I still keep my love for that couple. You shouldn't be so hard with yourself because of their attitudes since this is an AU, and I do think that: a)Courtney and Duncan can have their sugary sweet moments when they're together (Where do you think that "Do you think Courtney must be looking at the stars now?" comes from? ), as amusing as their relationship is when they aren't mushy. b)Gwen must be pretty defensive with guys, especially when she's had a bad day. That isn't bad at all, is a reasonable consequence since she has a single mother. Liked a lot the fact that in this AU Courtney and Gwen have been friends for a long time, and how Gwen feels immediately attracted to Trent (Which suits the show: She started checking on him since the very first episode * w *) "101 Questions"/"Untitled" (Right after the former) *sob* Too sad they don't have nice endings for DxC, but it was nice to see Duncan's romantic side "The Wizard of TDI" Hahahaha, LOVED the parallel between the TD characters and their Wizard of Oz counterparts. Did you know that in early drafts Dorothy was supposed to have a romance with one of the farmhands that becomes one of her companions in Oz? That opens a chance for Courtney and the "Heartless Sin Man" XD. "The Peace Contract" I actually think that's exactly how it would be between those 4 fav character of mine, especially if Trent has Duncan as a roommate and has to deal with the intempestive relationship he has with Courtney _U. Haha, and you're right, I was smiling like an idiot when my sweet guitarist couldn't help but look how Gwen fixed her skirt *- w -*. "Untitled" (Right after the former) Is very realistic, and it was surprising to know you had close experience about having a beloved one serving the country far away. I'm glad your oldest brother came back home. The fact that Geoff was a sniper reminds me of this fanart: art/TDTF2-Geoff-the-Sniper-193641851 "The Basic's to forming a Well-Thought-Out Homicide" Haha, I can actually imagine Courtney writing something like that. The only little note I have to make is that back then the prize was one hundred thousand dollars instead of a million. "Leave Out All The Rest" AW! Both of them are so sweet, and liked how Courtney started being friends with Gwen, Geoff and Bridgette, although it was a major surprise that she had a crush on Geoff. I mean, not that big because he's hot and adorable... *drool* BUT he doesn't look like Courtney's type... (Huge Finchel image coming). Oh, well, is very common to happen with your first male friend. "Control" Aw, you know how much I like smut (Curse you, pervy side of me), I'd have loved to see it getting to the home run XD. You did a good job portraying the poisonous atmosphere caused by rumours, and I felt so bad for Courtney when she notices her parents' rejection. I liked that sweet moment when Duncan comforts her. "30" DAMN, I'd have loved to see this one finished T 3 T, even more if part of the inspiration came from "PS I Love You": I relate a lot that movie with DxC. Making DJ Court's brother was an interesting touch. "Every Sky" Haha, oh, well, their age difference isn't that big, but I do remember that back in those ages it was a real scandal to date someone who was one or two years older than you. It would've been nice to see their young love developing. "What I Got" Hehe, it isn't only the paragraph with the "heartless soul" line (Which to be honest I find kinda cynical from Duncan's side because, COME ON, like he was a saint or a better person than Courtney, and she isn't THAT evil: Chris and Blaineley fit that category better) what could make the reader believe that Duncan is talking about Heather in all the story, but other hints too: The fact that she has a cat (Heather actually has one in the show), is in the cheerleading squad (Well, Courtney proved to be a nice cheerleader in TDA, maybe she could actually be part of it),... and her name or characteristic features (IE: Freckles, skin color, hair...) aren't mentioned. However, I love Duncan's strong desire towards Courtney and the way you describe it. Great job! |
TheSocialLoner chapter 1 . 7/24/2011 Pfft you think these suck? I liked em! But the footnotes killed me XD The sarcasm is great. But I think that "Glitter in the motherfucking air" thing is probably now my new favorite quote. Reading this makes me want to reread my old unfinished stuff. I'd like to see how terrible they are XD |
lolibarbie chapter 1 . 7/24/2011 I love it! Love it love it love it! (: These are hilarious and amazing, and some really made me wanna go back to writing DxC stories and not do my summer reading [but hey, I'm already not reading my summer reading books anyway...]. But anyways...loved it haha. |
rjdu656mZLZ chapter 1 . 7/24/2011 Wow, these stories were just so awesome! I loved "For The Last Time", "The Wizard Of TDI", "The Peace Contract", "Leave Out All The Rest", and "Control". Haha, Whoretney was my favorite line I think in the whole story. I dunno... there's just something funny about it all because it's so ironic! I love that you posted these stories and even though you didn't finish them, I loved them anyway. Maybe one day you will; you never know. ;D |
Ladyofthe80s chapter 1 . 7/23/2011 I really wish that you would've finished most of these too. D: and I love that you watch re-runs of Whose Line Is It Anyway? At the dawn of the morning just like me. That show was the damn best bu they just had to make Drew Carey's Improv-a-Ganza didn't they? |
DramaRose13 chapter 1 . 7/23/2011 I like it, I like it alot! |
Alexex chapter 1 . 7/23/2011 Uh, kayy... Can I just say that I kind of sort of fucking love you, dahling...? Seriously, you rock, for realz. And psh, two shout outs? ! Your footnotes are de shet, and make me lmao... Speaking of LMAO... One person said, 'I was lmao!', and I was like, OH SHIT! Lmao can mean 'laughing my ass off' but, the Acronym sounds unsettling to the ear! FUCK, IT'S A DISSONANT HARMONY! I learned that in instrumental music class, because I'm a little music nerdette. 8-) Oh perverted Trent...makin' us bitchez feel all lulz, and shit. If Trent were real, I'd ravage that guy... He's what Duncan is to you, to me. XD Maybe because he reminded me of this guy I had a crush on...but I now realize he's an uber douche. I'll go into more detail when I talk to you next, which will deffs be soon. You be bitchin', and on a mission, to make everything AWESOME. Rhyming stuff, LIKE A BAUSS. The Basic's to forming a Well-Thought-Out Homicide...huh. I think I'll be needing that for the tools in my classes... :3 MWAHAHAHAHA, oh yesss... *finger pyramid of evil contemplation, accompanied by sinister lightning flashes* OH HO HO HO, YESSSSS... Dude, you have cats too? Add it to the book of things we have in common. If I knew you in real life... I think my school would be less of a hell hole, and life would be fucking epic. WE BE CHILL, LIKE NINJABOSSES. Nothing is sexier than Naruto/Elric hair... IN A FUCKING HYBRID OF SEXINESSNESS. LIKE A TRANSFORER, MORE THAN MEETS THE EYE TO THIS SHMOZZLE OF WIN. AWWWYEAAAH. Bitches who be hatin', better answer to this rebellious mofo. I HAVE A CLARINET, AND A SAXOPHONE, SO YOU BEST BRING IT! I WILL SOLO YOU INTO SUBMISSION! Oh yeah, and remember this? "...You smell pretty. *Edward Cullen rape face*" "*Nelson stare* O.O" Good times, bruh. Goooood tiiiiimes. ;) I will talk to ya soon, G. Love, Alexex. ;) |
pomtdwt chapter 1 . 7/23/2011 LOL, Cereal, these are HILARIOUS! I can see why you didn't continue them. |
ChloeRhiannonX chapter 1 . 7/23/2011 Okay, these stories were amazing! I mean it, seriously! I wish you had finished some of them because they were...WOW! hehe! :D I liked them all, though most of the characters were OOC, but I like the characters OOC ;) hehe! I was wondering if I could do something like this, just put all of my unfinished oneshots into one long chapter. It's okay if you don't want me to, it is your idea after all :) Like I said, this was WICKED! :D |
IDontDance.Ever chapter 1 . 7/23/2011 Ha! Wish it was summer...it's winter down under and colder than Chris's heart... I really like the idea you've used here...some of the stories would have been really awesome if finished, but hey! Unfinished is cool too, adds more to the imagination. If I had a choice of choosing one of these to be finished, I would either choose the 101 questions one, or the Control one. I am absolutely in love with the whole Duncan/Courtney letter story. I was thinking about writing one myself, but I dont know if I'll ever get around to it...oh well. And the control story-Duncan and Courtney are slightly OOC, yet not OOC...if that makes any sense. Maybe if TDI went behind the cameras, this would be what Duncan and Courtney really were like. And I really do feel they should have put more emotion into TDI...would have made it a bit more interesting-not that it isnt already! Writing styles do change, mine definetely have. My first two stories both had happy (ish) endings, and all the others after that seem to be slightly depressive...dont know if that's for the better or the worse. Your writing style was good then, and it's awesome now! I really do hope you keep writing for DxC, or any other TDI couple (read one of your Geoff/Duncan ones once, actually found myself really enjoying it!) One last thing before I go-I think I've made my suckish review long enough-it's super cool that you have a twin borther. I really wish I had one...my little brother sucks so much, and I barely see my older one. Maybe I should just get a guy friend...too bad I go to an all girls high school :( |