Reviews for Fair Play
Sweetdeath04 chapter 1 . 11/30/2013
Hahaha! I can't believe I missed this when it was published! It's amazing! Great job!

SD04
xxDster chapter 1 . 5/26/2012
LOL! You crazy staffers indeed. I just finished reading all of your fics (albeit out of order) in one sitting and I loved every minute of them.

(Since all of the stories are intertwined, I'll just review them all from here.)

I read the fics out of order because I'm a slow idiot that didn't notice said order until I was through with the /third/ one. So I read them as Turning Tables, Spinning Out, These Bones, and Fair Play respectively. Sorry about that. I don't think that took away from the enjoyment any, though. As soon as I got the celebratory bonfire joke, I spent the next five minutes trying not to wake the house with my laughing and wiping the tears from my eyes. You guys have a good sense of humor.

I really enjoyed your characterizations! They were pretty spot-on, in my opinion, especially in the first three. I can definitely see Olivier and Hawkeye behaving as such in the manga/anime. The only thing I couldn't see was Olivier willfully agreeing to put on a dress of any sort since she abhors femininity of any kind, but that could just be my take on her. In any case, all three fics were well-rounded and well-written. Kudos to you both!

It saddens me that you haven't written anything since late 2011. I'd like to see more from the Spinning Out-verse! But oh well. What you two wrote was seriously enjoyable and I thank you for sharing! The past couple of hours have been great. (:
Just Me chapter 1 . 3/12/2012
"He's a widower, it's completely different! At least the sexual tens—"

"Edward Elric."

That sounded like the tone his mother used when he'd dug himself into a very deep hole

Best part, imho. I had tears in my eyes and couldn't breathe for a moment when I read this part. The whole story was certainly how I'd imagine this event going down. Without any butts to kiss to reach the top (at leas, for now), I could certainly see everyone dropping their guard and quipping at each other like this. You made my day. This was a great ending to your lovely little series that began with Spinning Out. :D
orphanaccount228 chapter 1 . 1/11/2012
I think most of this fic had me snorting, if not laughing hysterically. I love the interaction between everyone at dinner xD Fantastic work, guys!