U almost proved the makers of Roger the rabbit right when they say u can did from lol

Are u on drugs?

I am all for out-of-control Crack!Fic (and this one seems fun), but writing asides in the middle of your story is THE most annoying thing ever. Unless it's important to your story, please do not break the fourth wall until Author's Note time. It makes stories unreadable. Thanks.

Fuck. This story is too crack even for me.

the disappointing thing is I believe you could write a really good, non crack, Naruto gamer fic. would love to read it if you ever do.

2crack4me

I've tried to read it, but it's just too ghetto... Sorry.

This is so broken

? What the hell?

This is great for people who are bored and want to laugh it is honestly one of the funnier things I have read on this sight.

This became less and less a crack, and more the deranged ramblings of a retarded idiot. No humor, confusing plot with no explanation, vague and uninteresting backstory that doesn’t really explain anything, and last and worst of all, a beyond stupid author who thinks themself clever and amusing yet failing epicly at both.

Dumb, not funny

naruko hasn't had nay coffee

Okay, so I tried to take this somewhat seriously. I know the warning you gave. Know it's crack not to be taken seriously (despite what I said at first) But I just can't force myself to continue. Granted, it's kind of funny at times. But it's overkill. And trust me, one of my favorite sayings is 'there's no such thing as overkill, just not enough badass explosions' but at this point, unless you will seriously nerf Naruto within the next chapter or two... It's just boring to read. Sorry.

why you making him sound retarded