are you gonna write more? cause i definitley look forward to more!

Oh my glob, this was amazing! I'm just in love with your story!

OMG! please continue! ludwig is perrrfect! 3

I'm not sure if I should feel worse for Feli or for Gilbert... Hmm... Answer: Feli. TAKE THAT SUCKA!1 Sorry... Poor little Feli! At least Ludwig saved him in the end!

Oh man,this story is so thrilling,especially this chapter!The character writing is fantastic,the details/descriptions are amazing,and your writing holds so much atmosphere!Keep up the good work!

...poor Feliciano...I would imagine him extremely traumatized after this chapter.

At least Ludwig gave Gilbert a good beating. The latter isn't going to jail, is he?

This was definitely a change from the past chapters, which were very naive (Feliciano and Ludwig already declaring their love to the other) and sweet in a strange, teenage way. I would almost say unexpected but I suppose that if you did feel as though a bad guy was needed, one was needed. I was actually imagining Ludwig using the knife (which dissapeared in the fight?) but I guess not.

Huh, graveyard shift? Will we be able to learn more about these characters?

Thank you for writing this chapter. I will wait patiently for the next.

This chapter was amazing, but it made me sad...

omg lurves ludwig! do continue plzzzzzzzzzzzz

Ok I love Gilbert but I also love how u wrote this and he made a perfect bad guy here

this is a good fic

Gilbert should hit on Feli. Sorry but I like it when Germany gets jealous.

Awesome story you got here. A bit random I must admit, but overall pretty good so far.

Thank you for writing this.

Bring in Canada! Prucan Pleases the masses. And is Prussia a homophobe?

i love it, i wonder why ludiwg had feli hide? i hope there is more to come

I love this story so far! And the smut is sooo hot! Oh, and may I suggest for the next sex scene a 69? And maybe let Feli top? ;)

i love this story ,, it's been quite a while but i hope you still update .. :D