Awww cute and excellent job, I loved it and nice job

Awwwww! That was so cute! I loved it!

Nice, I like the idea of Ayame caring for Yuki, in spite of his somewhat self-centered personality. Plus, Yuki-as-a-baby is so adorable and innocent.

This was absolutely adorable and I really like this side of Ayame. Their mother truly is a horrible woman for not caring for her child; tossing one child away for another just for a high seat. Even with that said, it's good to know that Ayame is not like that and he can truly care for his brother. :)

Keep up the good work!

Awwwww!

Aawww! it's so sweet...If Ayame didn't always ignore Yuki, then maybe Yuki would actually care about his brother...Their relationship is strange somehow...

awwwww! I can't believe I missed this! it was utterly adorable! great oneshot, especially for when one's procrastinating. XD

So sweet X3

LOVE IT! Great job.

well at least someone cares about Yuki.

That was adorable. It's always good to see the brothers' bond at its infancy (no pun intended). I like how you capture Ayame's gentle concern, but still manage to make him... well, him (the whole "don't grab my hair!" bit was precious). He would say that. Their mother is so mean! xD This was a great read, nice length.

lololololololololool

So cute! Heartwarming too. Gr8 job Amethyst!

This was pretty awesome. I really liked this. Please write more of this fluff stuff soon.

Ahaha... You made me picture teenage Yu-chan giggling... _ disturbing, yet absolutely adorable.

And the part with ayame's hair... I applaud you for that. Yay! Ay-chan's being brotherly! How cute... *hugs Ayya*

You did a beautiful job (no surprise there) and I loved it a lot! yay! Can't wait for another one-shot! :D

Huggles,

Emzi-chan