I loved the little backstory you gave Jinx, and I squeeled at the cuteness of her and Wally! 13/10, would read again, and again, and again-

THIS IS TOO OVERWHELMING!

ME ENCANTO!
HERMOSO
Gran trabajo!

I really like Jinx and Wally fics, I find this couple simply adorable and perfect (I mean, come on, who doesn't like a good old 'hero and villain' romance?).

This was short and sweet and very well written (enjoyed the description parts the most). But what I really enjoyed in this one-shot was how you gave glimpses of Jinx's life before the H.I.V.E., and inserted the dark themes that you wouldn't of had found in the Teen Titan cartoon. Usually people write about Jinx during her time at the Academy, and what happens after she meets Kid Flash, but leave out her past that would explain her somber personality.

So just to say that I enjoyed reading this, and thank you for having taken the time to write it!

Awwwwwwww

Fluff...

Who'd have thought you'd write about that ?

And yet...

Your "artistic universe" is rich enough to include so many various genres, from horror (in the sense of "horribly dramatic stuff", not in the sense of horror story wz walking dead, vampires and all) to adventure, from romance to somewhat metaphysical, from humor to tragedy. And therefore, why not write some fluffy stuff ? As long as it doesn't get mushy, fine wz me. :)

It was interesting to have a bit of Jinx's background as she recalled about her past, where she came from and how life used to be so much more difficult than it is at present. Kind of comapring the BAD old times with the good new times, and see how it evolved from hardships and unhappiness to a comfortable situation where bliss can finally "bloom".

And naturally, so sweet, tender, moving, all these moments bw Jinx and Kid Flash. Never read any Flinx before... well, actually, one story for sure only, as far as i can remember (don't recall a second one)... but i find it nice. Although i naturally prefer RaeXJinki, eh eh ! (how UNsurprising, duuuh !)

Last, nice structural idea to have those... hum... how 2 call 'em... intertitles ?... bw the various parts. Might appear of secondary importance, but still.. it's one of those nice lil' stylistic ideas that are appreciated for what they are : original. :)

Looking forward to more fluff in another Flinx : 22 SECONDS.

And another couple of thumbs up for yr collection, Chum !

Be fine !

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Really good characterization of Jinx!

Loved it.

:) I love it!

This could stand to be longer.

This is at least your second story that breaks up a contemplative plot with some sort of grounding reference. I lost track of the theme headings (protection, hope, love, etc.) near the end, but they still flowed well with the plot.

This was my first Flinx fic and I can see the synergy. You show Jinx as savoring Wally's affection, which for her would be a novelty. The final scene of this story truly drives home the value of the simple pleasures. Good job.

Adorably sweet and amazing. :)

This is absolutely beautiful. The slow exposition of her past was excellent and you captured an almost innocent moment between lovers perfectly. The words interspersed added something interesting to the overall piece.

I feel like a literary critic. SQUEE! It was adorable!

There, that's better.

So sweet and the way its divided is great plus the interaction is sweet, but the backstory brillant dark tone highlighting a difficulty on being safe .

Sweet:) so sweet:D