Reviews for Don't Give Up
Lily chapter 1 . 6/11/2018
I loved this! But I wasn't expecting it to end sadly and now i am crying. Literally crying.
Guest chapter 1 . 8/21/2017
Amazing story. Had me addicted and bawling like a baby at the end!
NaruSasuNS chapter 1 . 6/19/2015
You hope it was okay... ?!
Hello, hello !
You killed Sasuke again.
Nice story. I've always loved stories about sick!Sasuke and blind!Sasuke... x)
notapieceofcake chapter 1 . 6/4/2015
NOOOO WHAT TORTURE FUCK OMIGOD I CAN'T-! THIS ISN'T FAIR! NOO!
I'm sorry but I can't help but get emotional over your fics holy sh**... Ugh. They're not good for my heart but I keep reading. You know, I even considered live tweeting my reactions, my thoughts while reading this.
Anyway. Fack.
Did Sasuke's condition get so bad so quickly because of that time Naruto went in in his pyjamas and took him outside his room for thw day and slept with him, or was it because Sasuke found out how less time hw had by talking to the doctor?
Argh. There are so many what-ifs and only-ifs this isn't /fair/!
Aahh sorry for my rant I'm worthless orz
gthy chapter 1 . 2/18/2015
this is one of the best fanictions i evr read and yet ... it's one of the sadest as well. i do love it but it's really sad for Naruto to loose the love of his life on such a cruel and painfull manor
LouiseUchiha chapter 1 . 6/26/2014
This was so sad T_T
So freaking sad!
Guest chapter 1 . 6/24/2014
it's great that naruto helped sasuke find love n shit but he really was the shittiest nurse i've ever goddamn seen holy fuck.
sekikaoru chapter 1 . 5/28/2014
Wow this story is really ending is sad but fitting. I can't understand why this fanfic get so little review,it deserved more review. Thank you for writing this beautiful story.
Sins of Blood chapter 1 . 5/8/2014
So, I read this in school, and well I cried, people asked what was wrong but I just cried
Guest chapter 1 . 4/12/2014
How could you! Just... How could you end it like that? *Tears*

Sigh-it was cathartic though
bridmatt chapter 1 . 8/6/2013
I don't know what makes me sadder, this fic, or the fact that you only have 44 reviews. Hands down this was one of the most heart-wrenching things I've ever read in this fandom. And not heart-wrenching in a cheap way with manufactured drama and false emotions, but the real deal. I desperately wanted Sasuke to walk again and go into remission, but as I was reading this, I knew you would have more integrity than to do that, as nice as it would have been.

I could actually imagine real people acting like the characters in this fic and experiencing the same emotions that they did, which is as big of a compliment as I can give you because so many fics ring false. Take Itachi for example. He wasn't part of the main coupling (or even a side coupling), but he was just as complicated and interesting as Sasuke and Naruto. I wanted to dislike him for his harshness, but I couldn't. So many things contributed to turning him into the character Naruto meets at the beginning of the fic: the deaths of his parents, having spent years helplessly watching Sasuke die a little more each day, knowing he'll soon be all alone... He just wanted Sasuke to be comfortable and at peace, even if he was sometimes misguided.

And that's not even touching on Sasuke and Naruto. I'd like to say so much more about our two main characters, but to keep from writing a novel, I'll just mention a few of my favorite (painful) moments. Sasuke's transformation from angry to somewhat hopeful was lovely and naturally done. After all that, it was crushing to realize that Sasuke had never never truly known how bad his condition was, not until the end. (I don't blame him for how angry he got.) I can only imagine how painful those three weeks without Naruto were after he left. With how rapidly he deteriorated after Naruto left, you could almost say he symbolically died of a broken heart since the illness killed him by reaching his heart. I'd like to think a little more positively and think that even if he was hurting without Naruto, it wasn't as bad as all that. He'd finally experienced love, so maybe he was able to take comfort in that.

And Naruto...I was hurting for him the whole time knowing he wasn't going to get his happy ending. Especially painful were his slow, horrifying realizations that he was falling in love and losing his professionalism, and the knowledge that he would inevitably get his heart broken. It was really important to me as a reader that Naruto be concerned about his status as Sasuke's caregiver. Throwing his professionalism out the window for love is no small thing! Yet so many fics act as though it is. But Naruto being worried about it the whole time added to his authenticity as a character and made me take him more seriously and respect him more. Obviously I wanted him to give in, but the fact that he didn't do so easily was important.

Also wow, the way Sasuke actually died, what a punch in the gut. I like to imagine instead of feeling distressed over Naruto and Itachi arguing, Sasuke got a bit of happiness at hearing Naruto admit he loved him. Naruto's resentment of Itachi was well-deserved, but their rapprochement at the end was touching, especially Itachi admitting that Naruto made the end of Sasuke's life happy. And of course the tie-in at the end with the Secret Garden was lovely.

I could go on and on, but I will politely tip my hat to you instead and just say: job well done! This is absolutely going on my favorites list.
nonoary chapter 1 . 1/3/2013
I have never in my entire life cried over a story or anything like I did over this in fact I don't ever cry over stories let alone a fanfic. I hate what this story did to me, how dare u write such a beautiful story and break my heart so? I mean I am just depressed now, awfully and horribly depressed. I don't think I can go on any more.
I think the only thing that might make me better is if u update we met at midnight or write a sequel to you're just a boy
xxBloodyCrossxx chapter 1 . 12/21/2012
Your amazing with the plot and I cried so much when the grave yard seen took place. You have my deepest thanks for writing this story. My friend had cancer and I fell in love with him and he died 4 weeks later. :') thank you.
Not amused chapter 1 . 9/14/2012
There are several things called "fic warnings" and one of them is actually called "character death". Another of them is called "OOC". And both would do wonders to the damn summary of this fic! This is angst, this is depressing and Sasuke's ooc is annoying to no end. As someone who was searching for a lighter and more serene fic, I have to tell you: Re-do the summary and *warn* people about this fic's real content! Don't make it sound like a "it's all gonna be ok".
narutosdick chapter 1 . 9/7/2012
OMFG ;_;
Okay i was crying for hours,WHY Sasuke WHY? -sob-
Anyways it was a good story!Ü
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