This is excellent. Really captivating.

I don't even know but I liked it.
It was kissing for the sake of kissing, a fluffy n cute read that was so much fun to read. Any possibility of a continuation?

I may have already reviewed this and said the same things buy I've been lookig through the fanfictions and this one is I have to say I think the absolute best. It's quite good actually very good this ones amazing.
Whoever wrought this please keep writing they're very good.

Whoa guys slow down there!

Very good story clip

Amazing story! Completely in charachter, great detail :) Keep on writing!

THIS. WAS. PERFECT!

OMG you have no idea how happy this made me! Please write more! Please, please, PLEASE!

Finally a well written, in character, Leviathan fic. Thank you SO much. Thank youuuuuuu.

I loved this soooo much... it was awesome. I liked all the similes and stuff, and your descriptions were wonderful.

Probably the best one shot I've read in a long time.

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They kissed!

LOVE IT.

WOW that was a great story. cu doz

Uh, it seems I'm alone in this, so you can probably overlook this as me being stupid, but for some reason I thought that they died at the end. ._.;; Uh, anyway, I understand the interpretation that you intended though. Not sure that people said BALLS at that time either, but not really important. Aside from those small things, I love this story! Hope you write more!

Win. Awesomeness. Love how vivid this is. Your descriptions are excellent! Very well written.

I apologize to your original fiction, but I am very, very, very glad to see these fics.

Adorable, amazingly written, perfectly in character, etc, etc, etc. Absolutely wonderful.