| Reviews for No disadvantages to occlumency |
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Future Forensic chapter 1 . 10/9/2014 Loved it! |
despicableme chapter 1 . 5/31/2014 HAHA :D this was so much fun! |
ShinDongHeeVegeta chapter 1 . 12/4/2012 Haha SEXY |
Ladii Emelia chapter 1 . 7/17/2012 I enjoyed this. |
Alexa1993 chapter 1 . 11/28/2011 |
Merteuil chapter 1 . 11/1/2011 PLEASE TELL ME YOU ARE GOING TO CONTINUE THIS? It was hot! |
VyVy chapter 1 . 9/3/2011 Hi, first off, wanted to say that I liked the story. It was entertaining and funny, and relatively well written, although you might want to proof read it or get a Beta, because the grammar isn't perfect. Still, it was good. One thing I will say however, is that you seem a little confused as to what Occlumency is. I think what you meant was Legilimency- the power that some wizards can use to read minds. Occlumency is actually the skill used to BLOCK someone from reading your mind, not read other peoples minds. I think that what Snape meant was that there were no disadvantages to Legilimency :) Other than that (and the minor grammar issues) it was good. And congrats on not just making this a smutty smutfest, you did limit it a bit, which I thought was good. Keep writing! Vy Xxx |
Megan Consoer chapter 1 . 8/26/2011 I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters? |
Allyll chapter 1 . 7/25/2011 You made a really used plot into something fun and refreshing! Good work! |
addictedmarvel chapter 1 . 7/22/2011 Oh I simply cannot wait for more of the story to be written. It had me wanting more of the story within the first few paragraphs XD |
Emolicious Angel chapter 1 . 7/22/2011 Wow this is really good! I never thought id like this pairing untill i read this. |
1.1.1.1.nolongerinuse1.1.1.1 chapter 1 . 7/22/2011 Absolutely fantastic. Loved it! |
priestess-yukii18 chapter 1 . 7/22/2011 haha love it :D |
McNasty4Slytherins chapter 1 . 7/21/2011 Lol I like it. Keep going. |