Please update it was such a good preview I want the rest of the story PLEASE!

0.0 Now you have to update because this preview is really shocking!

please please please please please update this soon. call off the wedding, make drew and may kiss; i don't know anything just update!

...please

Please update! I love it!

Xx Aka-The Leaf Xx

I love the idea of making May a wedding planner- and a really good one too. The ideas just brilliant! Update soon! :)

Okay, so I usually don't like the stories when the guy and the girl obviously like each other but there's a boyfriend/girlfriend in the way. Not a fan.

But totally I love your story.

I don't know why! You're a fantastic writer, and your grammar is good (hooray!). I think it's that you just pull off this kind of thing better than most people. I love the idea, and the plot, and how you keep the characters in character. I've read too many super sappy CS stories, and May and Drew just aren't like that. :/ You portray their relationship very well. :D

I hope you're able to keep writing! The computer dying must be a huge pain. :(

OOH! And in chapter two! The scene is from AG187, The Unbeatable Lightness of Seeing.

"I've been thinking a lot about you lately."

"Were they good thoughts?"

"Come on! Of course they were!"

x3

I love that episode because it's the only one with both Contestshipping AND Pokeshipping! It's just great! Plus, I didn't use any search engine or Bulbapedia thingy. So I should get bonus cookies. x3

Anyway, love your story. :D

-RD :)

I love this! Please please update! II did not hear about the boy in you school but a 15 year old boy died from my school on sept 14 from intestinal cancer. God bless you Ethan.

Cool I'm on Pottermore too! I'm SunScarlet88 and in Ravenclaw.

Anyways, I think the next chapter is going to be great! I think the preview was a nightmare or something. I'll be waiting patiently for the next chapter since I know I'm busy with school too.

The unbeatable lightness of seeing the part in the restaurant I'm too lazy to quote sorry.

But the diff was that may said she had been thinking of drew abd he had asked were they good thoughts? And here it's like whatever you wrote.

Hope you update soon! This shoul be one of the beat fics now.

you should really get a new laptop. I don't want to sound like your mother or anything but its drilled in my head 'cuz my father screams it a lot: you should save often. Don't worry about it, these kind of things happen to everyone. Hope you update soon!

Aw, that's so sad! Well, I'm not gonna throw rotten tomatoes at you, so don't worry! It's fine, it wasn't even your fault. Well, anyway, school starts on the same day for me, too! I hope you update as soon as possible! I can wait!

Awhh. That sucks :( No worries though. I'll wait haha. And I only throw rotten tomatoes at my brother! Lol. COOL MY SCHOOL STARTS ON THE 6TH TOO :D

Can't wait for the 3 chap. I may have a condition where im impatient hahaha better update fast :D

please review :)

i am way too lazy to sign in my account right now but this seems really good! :)

great job!