it would be really weird for Mcgee to find out later on that the daughter is actually his, and not some 1 night stands.

omg, so good! I'm crying, I'm crying!

oh I hate when the good ones end! top five definitely! love tim and ziva with family! more please!

chapter 12, best chapter yet!

This was adorable, definitely a favorite. I loved the baby''s name. I cannot wait to read more of your works. :3

This is a superb, (spankin') tale. I have read it several times and I promise to review more chapters next time. One thing has never been explained, although I have my suspicions) is the title. Why The Tower? I was honestly expecting a tale with all the usual characters in midieval times.

I'll watch for that, but I don't recall noticing an abrupt or strange end of chapter, you must have adapted or are a natural for this size chapters

I can't hear or read the word Lamaze without thinking of Reba clobbering Brock with a baby doll. Good chapter, just had to bring it up. Always makes me smile

Wha hoppen there?

A very unTonylike insightful moment, thinking everybody else would know if there were "something going on between them" before THEY (T&Z) did. Very nice.

Is she kidding with the no romantic feelings bit? If not, boy I bet you got a big surprise for her genre in about the next 6 or 7 chapters(months in story time).

I know it's just tony being All TONY, but can't we send him to Pakistan on a mission for about 8 months? Yeah, I know he's necessary for the story, but my GOD he's irritating!

Ok, got thru that pretty well. You and Z both

How could Gibbs not be disappointed? No matter the circumstance or relationship, when big mistakes happen disappointment happens and cannot be hidden, nor should it be. Mistakes carry consequences, and disappointing those we least want to disappoint is part of the deal. You did fine.

I love mcgee and ziva stories keep it up