Reviews for One Piece: Rise of the Second Pirate King
Reaperdan81 chapter 1 . 4/30
Loved it ,all of it ,more please
AnonymousChild chapter 1 . 4/22
Isn't Luffy supposed to be roger's second coming? He's way too violent.
Rebmul chapter 1 . 2/2/2019
I think you mean hiatus for death cause with as long as its been this story is dead
Lifelessman chapter 1 . 12/19/2018
Good Work...! 1
Logich chapter 2 . 12/14/2017
Aww man! are you still on hiatus?
Burning Moonlight chapter 2 . 12/5/2017
Awesome fic. Update please
ReadR13 chapter 2 . 10/12/2017
Good story, hope you continue it
Flamarow chapter 1 . 6/21/2017
That was a great "prologue" which would have normally been 2-5 chapters for most other writers. Its too bad you put this on haitus as it looks like a cool idea so far, though admittedly confusing since I expected full recall instead of a suppressed secondary personality. I do understand the reason for the rewrite though since several sentences made little sense with their current grammar.

If you ever get around to the rewrite, I would happily beta it as I do love an overpowered/smarter MC and especially love One Piece fanfictions.
zAnimelover chapter 2 . 4/6/2017
update plz! This Is Amazing! XD
aslan333 chapter 2 . 1/23/2017
hey please update this.
creativesm75 chapter 2 . 1/2/2017
very good
ReaperOfBalance chapter 2 . 10/4/2016
Good chap, is this strictly nami and Luffy or will there be others later on since many Kings had more than one wife?
Anyway I look forward to the possible wake up call Luffy will give to a few of his crew mates that aren't changing and the FUN that will be had at Enies Lobby
superfanman217 chapter 2 . 9/22/2016
i love this story
ReaperOfBalance chapter 1 . 9/14/2016
Interesting start and I'm happy to see another op/serious/godlike luffy
Looking forward to more
Also, a weapon for usopp that is lethal/effective would be a rifle or crossbow
draco7347 chapter 1 . 7/29/2016
love story cant wait for new chapters
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