This is a solid story, and I applaud you for that. I find it hard to tie all the loose ends together. I've read the clarifications you made in response to reviews, and I wish you'd explain it better in the story, mostly with Overdrive's rules. Not everyone is going to read the reviews, and all of the three pages of it at that. But honestly, that is really my only gripe. This story makes you think, and that's hard to come by.

This book was great! I cried so hard at the end.

I like this one I will make sure to read all the other XP lol ( sorry for my bad english I'm french )

...What did I just read?

This story is awesome but, i cant like it cuz you took out 3 out of my top 5 fav ponies. :( great story though

I've always loved your stories. They always bring out a lot of emotions, and I can tell that you have put a lot of effort into witing them. I love your stories and I will always read them again and again. Keep up the good work. : )

yay happy ending

A cliffhanger that is also an epilogue. I can't wait to read the next one.

Wonderful job.

Really Dagrocks, why would you think that?

decent story so far can only get better i hope. also i'm religious i dont see why you flat out asumed religion means christian faith and the big G man but ether way. im not gonna bitch about being religious or not but not believing in somthing dosent mean it's not true and if you flat out disbelieve somthing you could get burned...and not medophoricly ether.

wow, this story was... what am I saying? It is ... wow... you left me speechless, not an easy task, congratulate you, awesome story cannot wait to read more of your stuff

and the Epilogue s just Brilliant! wow, I'm gonna be talking in a British accent all night (what happens to me when I watch an episode of Doctor Who)

great job

I cried at the ending before derpy TT

Poor Flo- Er Monty...

*Sniff* Poor Luna... She and Vinyl are my favourite.