Ay Dios... es de esas veves en que quiero que el que gane sea Jim...

This is excellent.

That was beautiful.

I kind of do feel sorry for Jim. John never figured it out, did he? You handled Jim's obsession with John very well. Great job!

Never felt sympathy toward Jim before but now, oh my.

AND HE NEVER KNEW! Well ouch!

You know, when I read the warning for 'general creepiness' I thought 'well, it's Moriarty, what can you expect?' This -this I did not expect. Wow. You really brought the meaning to the word creepy. This is an amazing -definately creepy, story but I absolutely love it. It's extremely well written too!

Wow

Wow I loved Moriarity's perspective. His absolute obsession with Watson was intense and wonderfully written. I feel sorry for him - John never did know. Great story!

Good story!

Jim was really, really crazy in this story. It was written well. And i really enjoyed reading it.

This was really cool. There arn't a lot like it. Good job.

So sad and Awesome!

Thank you for this masterpiece! 3

Very, very good. The only stories I can read involving Moriarty are ones where the couple is Sherlock/John and there's some one-sided Moriarty/John, because, as complex and interesting as Jim is, he really is just too evil (and John too good) to ever deserve John, or really, ... any happiness at all. *so-sad* Sherlock, on the other hand, has potential. Thus, I'll always be Johnlock-er, though Mary might actually be the safest/best choice for him!

Good.