Hi just read your story it was very good.

Humorous and descriptive! I would love to know what happens next. :)

Totally didn't expect Bubbles to be a redhead, very cool. I like it, good vocabulary and imagery.

Love this! I haven't thought of the Pretender in *years*! Very fun to read!

oh man i loled XD

You write Miss Parker really well. And I love that the software causing all the problems came from Jarod, and was deliberately bought through purchasing.

Nice to see this! A good read. I especially enjoyed the characterization. This Bubbles is some character; interesting to see that she is the one who always gets what she wants. You don't say the same for MP or Raines; there is no mention of Lyle. Apparently her reputation has had a lasting effect on MP - at least I am assuming so from her reaction and comments as Sydney and Bubbles leave. Loved her final smirk and comment. Keep up the good work! We appreciate.

I just wanted to say how happy i am that your writing again. so far i have enjoyed every story that i have read by you (i'm working on getting through all of them) and that you are one of the main reasons why i origonally started to watch old Who, which is better than new Who. i hope you finsh your sequal to "A Long History" but i understand if the past two seasons have put you off or (even more important) your dreams come true. I hope that you accomplish everything that you want out of life.

Rachelle Manley

I liked this. It's nice to revisit Sydney and the gang-been a long time since I read a Pretender fic, though I still find myself missing the show at odd moments. Nobody even shows the repeats anymore.