I have two points about this chapter 1. Snape kissing Selena and trying to be with her is basically illegal Selena is still a student so she can't go round sleeping with a teacher. I really don't understand how you think that kind of relationship is right.
2. You put that Selena was 2"weeks late meaning she can really only be 2 weeks pregnant but somehow she managed to feel the baby? You can't feel the baby at that point. At that point the baby would be a size of a pea.
Apart from that it was a great chapter.

I'm not reading this anymore because you are really making out that Draco is evil when he's not. Honestly I think it's disgusting to read. Draco is one of my favorite harry potter characters and the way you are presenting him is really upsetting.

So Selena tells her father exactly how long ago Draco raped her. I'm sorry but a rape victim wouldn't want to remember it at all and certainly not the date it happened.

Not going to say anything...

After this chapter I think you have totally misread Draco because he may be cruel sometimes but I don't think he would rape anyone. Draco isn't a bad person you can clearly see that when he's crying over him hexing Katie bell. He clearly regrets what he did to well as this he didn't have the courage to kill Dumbledore does that make him a bad person. I just don't understand why people seem to think that Draco is this evil person. I really don't think it's right you've made him into a rapist when clearly he would never do that. However I suppose it's just your opinion on Draco.

Another great chapter

This first chapter is very interesting looking forward to where it goes

I'm your two hundredth reviewer!
Okay now that's out of the way! I absolutely love this story! :) I'm sad to see it end. Hope to see you soon!
Lots of love!
MusicIsLife2015

A beautiful end to this piece. I never wanted it to come to this.

But I'm glad you ended it so tastefully.

Thank You...For everything.

Moony

Awwww nooooooooo...am gonna cry! with happiness that they have a family and in sadness because its ended.
One of the most different George stories ever...I loved it!

Awwww that was great.
Am glad Selena has to pay for her mistakes.

I really can't believe Selena killed her brother in law in front of her husband and mother in law-_-

GREAT CHAPTER

loved it

Amazing, Its nearly ending:(