Awww I love it

Loved it

very good i have enjoyed it alot and please keep writing its really goooddddd

Okay I do nit know if they have told you but, the word "Pendejo" is a really bad word. And while it has thr same meaning as jackass. It's a really bad insult.

good story!

BRAVO! BEAUTIFULLY WRITTEN.

continue!

This was a really fun read. I wish it was longer and a little less rushed but I loved all the pezberry fluff moments. So cute!

Lol, "It's dysfunctional and, okay, strangely incestuous when you think about it "

First of all... I love your story, so please don't get angry... I'm quite sure than now it's difficult for your to change anything, but... your spanish is quite bad. I'm sorry! ... i don't want to be cruel or anything... but your verbs need some help because you are saying incorrect things.

you tried to write "I saved my friend's life" but what you really said was: "the life saved me at my friend" which it doesn't have any sense...
the correct writting would be: "salvé la vida de mi amigo" but even this is wrong... because in spanish you should difference between female and male... so you should say: "Este verano, salvé la vida de mi amiga"

Last chapter had some mistakes as well... when Santana is fighting with her family... she says something like: "Pero no pretendo que es la víctima aquí"
the sentence is quite good, but the verb is incorrect, because it confuses the subject. I suppose the person who is talking is Santana... then it should say "PEro no pretendo SER la víctima aquí"... o if the subject is her father it should say: "Pero no debería pretender que es la víctima aquí".

if you need any help in the future with your spanish, in this story or a next one, I'm from Spain... it's quite easy for me... i don't mind! ;)

regards and a big hug! ;)

I loved it. Especially all the Pezberry fluffiness. I also love the even though Rachel and Santana are a couple Santana is still friends with Brittany.

I love Finn as a character, but yea in this context that's pretty much the reaction I'd expect. Good for Rachel to stand up for Santana

haha cracked up at the indoor water feature

Intense! Glad that Rachel is getting Santana to lower her guard a bit

Real issue to be talked about right there. Good stuff with the conversation in this chapter.