That was so sad

Make a sequel! But Sebastian wouldn't actually do that...

sniff sad

This is very good.

Seriously, no death scene where Sebastian holds Ciel or some shit like that?

He died having sex? Wow. I don't know if I should find that really funny or just really tragic. I'm torn.

:'( so ciel dies... and he and sebastian never... and there's no more story? D'X

...were it not for my broken heart, our first time wouldn't have to be the last...

WHAT
;_;
I died at this
Ohmygod this is so beautifully written and so sad... I DEMAND A SECOND CHAPTER

that was awesome but the last part was funny to me

"Sebastian, forget our contract. I'm going to be committing suicide tonight," Ciel Phantomhive said ripping off his eye patch staring down at his butler whose lips split into a smile, "What a coincidence my Lord. I was just coming upstairs to kill you."

dude really..really..really...
R.I.P
Ciel Phantomhive
died while having sex

This has to be one of the best stories I've ever read *crying* I love it. It's touching, it's romantic, it's a masterpiece! Aww. They were together until the very end. It's so sweet. I kind of want a sequel, but this is beautiful and wonderful on it's own. Bravo! *claps* You, my dear, are one hell of a writer

Of my freaking god! How could u not write a second chapter to this?! Please do! And thank you! Peace!

AAAAHHHHH the ending was so perfect! Well done indeed!

that was somewhat strange but wonderful all at once.

have you ever consider doing a sequal like maybe him turning him into a demon during ;) just a idea, i really enjoyed your story :)