Reviews for Chocolate Stars
nemesis90 chapter 1 . 5/4
Hermione taught us all something very important, we can find friends that we get along with best and our mojo in life, even when the world seems to not be getting along with us.

Hermione had (head-canon) issues in the muggle world, and then clearly did not resonate with the other girls in her house (Parvati) or other houses for that matter. She was embraced as a more mature friend by Harry and Ron, kept them in check and found herself to be on equal footing with her seniors such as Percy, Bill, members of the Order. She was ahead of her age and time, and she only stood her ground more as she grew older, refusing to conform and never hesitated in speaking her mind. Some may say she lacked tact, but diplomacy wasn't going to get you very far in the war against Voldemort. Take the house-elf libera..er SPEW, or her standing up to Harry with his saving-people-thing, or her reporting the firebolt.
Tonirae chapter 1 . 10/23/2018
Who needs those meanies? She's gonna meet Ron soon
AvidReader2236 chapter 1 . 2/16/2017
Oh my this brought back memories...Poor Hermione!
hpfan addict chapter 1 . 8/12/2015
That was brilliant!? I imagine that must've been exactly what it was like for her? So, I think you fully captured her character beautifully! And the innocence?—mixed with the inherent vulnerability? Extremely well done! If you ask me?! Cheers!;-)
Ravenclaw-Thestral chapter 1 . 4/24/2015
Great story, I like the insights into Hermione's parents as well. She has such amazing qualities, it's good to see more of the characters who would have influenced her to be the character we love.

(Unless I've not got to it yet) It would be great to see what you would write about Hermione finding her parents and returning their memory.

Loving your work! Thank you!
lovemya2000 chapter 1 . 1/22/2015
Poor Girl
top story chapter 1 . 12/6/2014
Oh, if she only knew!
Fender a.k.a. Me chapter 1 . 8/16/2013
Wonderfull! Ahhhh... I can not stop reading you stories, Lucy. What a wonderful job, every time
Late Bloomer 23 chapter 1 . 7/22/2013
Aww you did this chapter really well, i found myslef blubbing by the end of it only because we have all met those people who are like that. but i am glad she got to celebrate her birthday
Canon Archives chapter 1 . 4/13/2013
Hehe! Good guess! ;)
So cute! 3
Pink Mockingjay in Hufflepuff chapter 1 . 10/22/2012
Save the world, Ms. granger? How very right you were! Love it! :)
Being A Wallflower chapter 1 . 8/22/2012
A really sweet oneshot! You can imagine now how wonderful it would have been for Hermione to get that letter to Hogwarts. All English is correct, from what I can see. Hermione's wish came true :)
theburrowclock chapter 1 . 7/25/2012
This was adorable and sweet and kind of heartbreaking. There's just one thing, Hermione was born in 1979, so this would be her tenth birthday. ;)
Lou The Manc chapter 1 . 7/23/2012
Oh, I love this! Poor Hermione - if only she knew eh? :D
You should write a companion piece about what Ron's doing on the same day (please please please, begging, pleading, big puppy dog eyes and I promise to share my Every Flavour Beans and give you all the nice flavours...)
wickedcml chapter 1 . 6/22/2012
Awww, I cried! What a well written and heartbreaking story. Excellent ending and I don't like Jennifer and Alexandra either.
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