Oh my, so well written...but such a sad story...I'm thankful for the ending though!

Sad, touching and heartwarming story. Thank you for sharing.

Loved this story. Sad about little Hannah.

There wer multiple emotions running through my mind reading this story...first, it is a good story...the reader is , or should be emotionally involved if there is any heart in them...

"There by the grace of God go I"...How many times did we get blamed or punished, either when partially or completely not our fault...or we are faced by a tragedy like 9/11 or even a highway accident and realize that it could have been me or mine, and how relieved we were when it was not...there are no words for those emotions, none that you want spoken aloud...this author has verbalized beautifully what we can only feel...

such a beautiful sad but loving story! great job!

excellent story. for me, all very true to character, loved Adam's thoughts and feelings here, I really felt for Sarah and Hannah, and the ending was perfect.

thanks!

You have a great storyline. I would love to see you expound ont he chapters a bit more.