One year.

That's how long it took you to update this story, one year.

Yes, I figured you deid but hey... What a ressurection!

This was a complete badass chapter, humanity strikes back! I really loved it, characterization was brilliant, the pacing was perfect, the narration was decent, the sense of danger was relevant throughout this chapter. When I was reading it I felt like I was in the middle of the action. Your writing and narration has improved has improved as well ;P

I really wonder what is going on with Kenta the series of body spasms he's getting. I think he might be going through some type of physical metamorphises. But I love the whole Haven Special Ops angle and holy crap, Craine is a total... Badass. There's no way else to describe him. He kinda reminds me of Levi in Shingeki no Kyojin/Attack on Titan (Good anime, btw). I would love it if it's the Haviens that get the better of Oki and not Kenta or the X Gang.

The Korros and Ursela fight is awesome to say the least. I love the way you describe the little things, it really engages one into the story.

Overall, the chapter was beast. No complaints on my side, I was totally invested in the entire chapter word for word.

Final yeah, eh? Wishing you well in everything, dude. I have to be hitting the books too man, lol. Looking forward to the next chapter, no rush ;)

very good i cried this is beautiful

What? No props... Awww,lol. Just kidding.
I must say this is a short chapter and seems a little "rushed" if you ask me. That's why you should take your time. But you don't have to explain. The fighting isn't half bad but Ursula is much stronger than Denkuma and Korros' fight with Denkuma was the clash of the titans. Not to add any unnecssary presure. Wonder where's Blitzo and company? They probably on their way the battle.
So Kenta's off too see the general. I hope the next chapter will be a blast;P

Hiya mate, I thought I should review this chapter again since the last one sucked. I mean c'mon half human-half cyborg, what the hell was I thinking!?
Looking at the power level charts I realise how strong they are. Zeang is even on par with Denkuma, Arnika is stronger than Vegeta and Goku at this point in time. So Blitzo is stronger than the Eternal Warriors? 5 years ago they weren't even a match for Cuo and Porter!
WMA Tournament can't wait to see how it will play out but I already know MWHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA HAHA *cough*cough*

This is it! This is what I waited for! It reminded me why I loved reading DBX, the crystal clear fighting, the narration(even I could feel the pain Ursula inflicted on Kenta)

I love the idea of the emergency personal it makes it more realistic, now if only the Havien army could arrive it would give it that sense of realism.

Magnificent chapter, I'll be reviewing some of the chapters of Volume 1 I did'nt get around to doing.

Sorry for not reveiwing earlier its just that I lost my spark for fan fics, heck, I even stopped with my own fics.

I love this chapter, it really sets up the pace for the rest of the story. Can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter. I just got the OVA cant wait to read it.

Horus, huh? Interesting. I wonder who he is... I have a small question, though. Why was Ferris crowned the champion? Evil or not, he killed his opponent, and that is automatic disqualification, isn't it?

The only error I spotted is down below:

' "Thanks you, sir," said the waiter stiffly,' Thank

Anyhoo, that's it. Announcement? Is it good or bad? o-o Anyways, can't wait for next chapter to find out who Horus is. - Good luck~

Woah, what a serious dark and brooding chapter this is. Not much to say other than we were let into most of the charactors thoughts(specifically Ferris and Arnika)

Cant wait for the the announcement,see ya;)

Wow, impressive. Ferris managed to beat Primal. He must have been bluffing when he said he could destroy everyone and was holding back his strength.

Now, I wonder what's in store for the warriors next? Are they going to keep training now that Frieza's army has been made aware of their existance? We'll find out next chapter. :D

What a gory chapter, there was enough blood for a blood donation;) I change my mind, this is by far the best chapter I've ever read on DBX.

The final battle was excellent with total anarchy! Even though Primal came out a little on the weak side this was a awesome battle.

Just thought I should ask, where is Korros? I have been meaning to ask for a long time but each I forget.

Geani, Zeang, and Arnika handed your rear-end to you at the end, eh. LOL!

Righteous chapter,dude. Can't wait for the next chapter!

Whew! What a chapter,stunning stuff!

Primal's demeanour lets me think of Raditz,lots of potential. I would'nt have figured him out to be so week considering the way he was taunting Rhuna ''I'm thinking about cutting it short and beginning Judgement Day right now'' lovin that line.

I agree with littiemidget, I think Primal is just a warmup for something bigger.

The Ferris/Kenta match was fair since Ferris did train with King Kai.I would like to see how it would go down out of the arena, no holds barred (energy waves, Kaio-Ken, swords, maybe even blood ;) )

This is my favourite chapter because of the plot development.

Can't wait for the next chapter, update soon...

Yay! I love it when this updates! :D Primal wasn't that strong... it surprised me. But something tells me he's just a messenger boy. DX

The fight between Kenta and Ferris was amazing! It was so good! :O They seemed to be fighting at the same level, but I kinda figured Ferris would win from the beginning. Does that mean that Ferris now fights Primal? O-O

'Layering his fingers with a protective coating f invisible ki,' replace 'f' with 'of'.

'In that moment, his concentration wand defences were both broken.' Lol, blonde moment: I thought to myself 'what's a concentration wand?' before I realized it was an error. XD

Okay, well, that's it from me. Why do these chapters always go by so fast. TT-TT It's so sad, lol. But it just gets me even more pumped for the next chapter! I'm so excited! See you then. :D

I've been waiting for this chap' a long time,though the only highlight for me was Rhuna kicking the daylights out of Coster, who knew she had it in her to attack a innocent Havien(just as well,in Vol. 1 the guy was annoying as hell).

Primal's full intentions still isn't revealed,he was just smirking and he's a villan i hope he's a good one and his strength is awesome and i luv every second of it.

The first half of the chap seems only from Blitzo's POV.

Anyway's great chap in terms of storytelling.

Cant wait for the next chap,keep up the good work!

I still have your other story in my inbox, but I just couldn't wait to read the newest chapter of this! These fights were chosen by you, weren't they? They probably would have been better for your own enthusiasm if they were randomized. Just think of all your characters being able to fight each other and not even YOU know the outcome. -

I have a comment that I probably should have posted last chapter, but forgot. The World Martial Arts Tournament doesn't let fighters use weapons or armor, but how come Primal was allowed to wear his armor when he first went onto the stage?

'Without a Scouter is was impossible to get an exact number.' Is to it?

' "What's a lady like you doing her anyway?" ' Here.

Okay, well, that's it from me! I have to say, I was pretty surprised that Blitzo and Makurin gave up so easily. I mean, the finals is what they were waiting for. Idk. Anyways, I'm excited for the next chapter, and I'll read your other chapter as soon as I can. - See you next chapter!

This was such a great chapter! I'm sorry I couldn't read it sooner! I was so excited to read this recently because I've been re-watching my Dragon Ball DVD's, and I've gotten obsessed with Dragon Ball Z again! :D This is just like a Dragon Ball series that I've never seen before. Seriously, I love this series, this is probably my favorite story saga of yours! The only error is below.

'More than one draw dropped.' Jaw, maybe?

Hm, I wonder who this mysterious fellow is? What race is he from? Zarbon's? Or maybe Cui's? Anyways, I'm so pumped for the next chapter. Get it out soon! :D