How can the be the end? That is a horrible way to end and not have a sequel.

Thanks an. Enjoyable read

Wonderful story! I'm going to your page to see if there is a sequel. Just wanted to let you know I loved it. I wish there was someway to give rose and enmet a baby , than,s again!

I don't know if your going for a different character for Demetri, but Demetri isn't muscly if you weren't going for a different character, just thought I'd ask. Felix was the muscle and Demetri was the tracker. Good chapter though, you have a great way of creating scenes, keep at it.

alice... my wifey p.p I hope she'll be okay P.P good build up to this chapter. I never expected someone to make the volturi as strong as they should be in regards to "realism" because a lot of fan fiction I read, they have the Cullens kill them all in like a paragraph or two...the story was going good then you do that... you know... but yours, very "realistic". I mean real for fiction lol. It's believable and well written and I like your Nessie personality. She's different from the one I wrote and the others people wrote on this site, well done, keep it up and bring back my wifey! P.P

i love this story and i understand rosalie i really enjoyed this envy though i wish it was longer but i like it

oh my gosh i love this story and its 36 chapters i am not done but thank god you are devoted to this story

i didnt really like the ending
i loved it until when they met alec at the clearing
you kinda lost it..the spak that was there..you could have ended the story after the honeymoon cus it was like replaying whst happened in breaking dawn only really boring..

love it

Great

favorite fanfiction:]! Thanks for this story you have inspired me to start writing again!11

sweet!

poor alyssa
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THIS IS THE BEST ONE IVE READ!;]

WTF