Well I for one was enjoying this. I also strongly suggest that when people write bad reviews that you ignore and block them. Constructive critiques good or bad are helpful but just ranting because they don't like "YOUR" story is the work of hopeless losers that need to be blocked. Their are plenty of stories here that I absolutely hated. But guess what...I just didn't favorite or follow the story and went to find one that I would enjoy. This was one that I was enjoying. I will say this to you though, by stopping this story you let them win, you gave someone you shouldn't give a rats ass about...power over your life. So please realize that you can't please everyone, no one can... Not even God lol. I always look at it like this. There's only 3 people I need to please in my life and if I stay true to myself and do that then I know that there will be plenty of others that will like me. If they don't it's no sweat off my back and they don't deserve my giving them the time of day. OK scoldings done lol. Bro you've got some talent alright, and if you really enjoy something don't let anyone stop you. Chase your desire and you'll always be happier for it.

K post the rewrite soon k

It was fine I liked it even if it has some flaws if something happens push through it see yah merlin out

PLEASE make more.

Come on this us the best fanfiction ever and yo shouldn't care about what other people think

What the hell! Those assholes have no clue how badass this story is and you should continue writing it and forget about those dumb shits! They don't know how hard you worked on this story. If they didn't like it, all they had to was stop reading! I mean how fucking hard is that!? You are the best Rosario Vampire/Assassin's Creed fanfictio. Writer ever! I hope my words have inspired you to continue writing this story and again, don't listen to those assholes. They are throwing rocks at a giant. A giant who writes the best fanfictio ever!

I liked this story. I hope you do pick it back up and if you do I look forward to continue to read it.

it was good as it last but all must stop at some point it made me sad my favorite game is assassin's creed and my favorite anime is Rosario vampire and this is the only combined story and no writing programs work on my computer all give virus or don't load

Awesome story

please continue and re-write please, theidea is good, it's just the poor exicution

Is this supposed to be one of those troll fics? Because it falls in the 90% of Sturgeon's Law.

Don't care what any asshat says about this story its pretty good. Keep doing it or start anew.

Don't let people tell you what you can and cannot do. Everyone who's been dissing you is a dick and I highly suggest you get up of your ass and continued what you started.

wow...(sarcasm)
an author that dosent finish his story is someone who won see things through to the end

-DurekuDragon

hmm... this is a good story line, but you need to work on your grammar and plot(its a little to simple and a little more detail goes a long way). it would also help if you got a beta reader or if you just had someone edit it.