WOW! This is amazing.

You are a crazy good writer! This is AMAZING, it really portrays Eli's emotions. (:

I don't usually like reading poetry, but this was amazing.

this is great (:

and yeaaah, i felt really sad for eli in "Love Game" blehh poor dude. ha, i also wanted to pimp slap clare for causing a scene... loll

.GOODNESS.

GREAT POEM! I liked how you portrayed how Eli feels! Plus, I was kind of in awe of how well you do poetry! Great job!