OUCH? Ouch. Ouch! Paaiinn... Not Dobby...

You are a fucking moron for writing this shit and just because Charlie weasly is handling dragon he is not Merlin there are many who does this shit. Your excuse is as shit as your writing is. Fucking ruined this story.

What the fuck was this shit? All the power and experience Harry has and you let him get thrashed and make him crawl back to Hermione. Don’t give a fuck if that’s the only time it happens, shouldn’t happen in the first place.

damn hermione seems to be stronger than Harry.

harry was quite weak in the last chapter why didint he use the Overlord Magic shield thing

didint really like lunas underage incest shit

Okay I truly hope that this story has not been abandoned. Because to do that would be a crime. I need this story to be completed one day. It is a true work of a master. I have enjoyed this greatly. Even how his parents reacted and their choices were a shock and a wonderful surprise. I can't wait to see what you do to them. I also love what you've done to Hermione and Luna. Absolutely amazing work!

Hehehehehehe. Hahahaha. This is promising...

Somehow I suddently had a vision of a crossover between this fic and the one where Lilly was actually Nyalarpothep, The Crawling Chaos. (Lovecraft.)

"They grow up so fast." Lilly wiped away a tear. "One day they're in their diapers, playing with their toy broom, and before you know it...they gather a harem of sex slaves, wreak bloody vengance and raise the dead."

Would have been awesome.

Your fic is still pretty damned good tho. *Grins*

If I haven't already said it; More details on his evil villainy, even the gory actions is ALWAYS good!

If you're worries about faint-hearted readers, just insert a warning, like; "Torture begins here" or "Graphic violence ahead" and then "eng of violence" or whatever.

Everyone loves details, even if some people prefer to skip some types details. As every Autor Class or How to Write book ever written says; Show, don't tell.

i miss this

It is funny in a sad way

Amazing story, one of the best evil Harry stories I've read. Really enjoyable characterizations and conversion from their Canon selves. I look forward to what Harry has planned for the corpses. With Luna dressing them up in funny outfits I keep getting the image of Harry sending out an army of undead Order members to dance to Thriller at Dumbledore or the Ministry.

Need lots more chapters its a good story.

Uhh... What the fuck? He has been the fucking overlord for 8 years and can't beat Charlie fucking Weasley? What has he been doing, jerking off?