Awww! Lavender is legit one of my favorite characters, so I saw this and HAD to read. First of all, excellent job - you captured Lavender wonderfully in this. I loved at the beginning, about seeing all the places where they sobbed. It was very cute. You fashioned the moment perfectly, about Ron looking at her and she leveling eyes at him. And of course, the last line was perfect.

Great job! You succeeded in understanding the female mind, in my opinion. :D

Ooh I can definitely see Lavender thinking like this durin that scene! She's a little bit crazier than the average female ;) I didn't see a single grammatical or spelling error and I definitely think your characterization was spot on! Keep up the good work!

I really liked this. I thought that you described Lavender's sadness really well and I liked many of the sentences that you used. Overall, I think it was a lovely one-shot, with drama, anxiety and a bit of humour. Well done!

I normally don't like Lavender, but I really love this story! Her emotions as a result of the heartbreak are realistic and portrayed really well. I hope you make a sequel. I really want to know what's going to happen between Lavender, Ron, and Hermione.

I think you did a good job with portraying her bitterness here as well as her jealousy for Hermione. Lavender is definitely the type to be angry and resentful. I liked the idea of having a personal dementor squeezing her heart. That was really great imagery. Overall you did a great job without being overly dramatic and ruining the emotions you've built up as Lavender fics tend to do.

Interesting. It's nice to see Lavender's point of view. She really doesn't understand that she was just way too clingy and pushy, nor that didn't have a real relationship. A relationship only filled with kissing is not real at all.

Ah, don't bother trying to understand the female mind. I don't even get it, and I AM a female :D

There are so many fantastic lines in this story, so be warned, this review is probably going to get rather long :D.

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"Her toast was starting to get soggy."

The abrupt frankness of this line just made me laugh. :)

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"Almost like Christmas had come early, but it was actually April fools day."

Fabulous juxtaposition!

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"It was like she had her own personal dementor, his scabby hands closing around her heart, every now and then giving an extra painful squeeze."

The imagery here... There are no words to describe how good it is.

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"But then as soon as it'd come the moment was gone, he looked away, and all Lavender had accomplished was bending a spoon."

Ahhh, Lavender. That's all you'll ever accomplish :D. This made me laugh as well.

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All right, all right. I'm done.

Can you tell I enjoyed this story? :D

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I love this! It was very well done, and I can't stand Lavender. -_-

The writing is brilliant, it's actually quite relevant to teenage girls everywhere, lol. The use of emotion was very profound and remained consistent through the whole thing, and it had very good flow. You're a great writer!