Sorry to be crude but.. This story is the shit!
I was confused about all the different names in the first chapter but when I figured it out I really got into it.. By far one of the most cultured fanfics I've ever read. Love all the art and dance. Wonderful protrayal of characters, especially Descole. Just really really gripping and fantastic!

Oh my god. That was... completely different to any way I've ever pictured Jean Descole. Sequel? Yes. Yes. Yes yes yes yes yes. It is now necessary for me to find out what Jerome and Jean/Francis end up doing to each other! You're a great author, don't stop writing!

Loved this! I'm actually knid of disappointed it's ended...

Yeah do a sequel!

And I can't wait to co-wrote with you!

LOve ya! dandelion Oak

I really like the ending to this too! Great chapter! :)

I love the ending to this chapter!

I really like the chapter names. Even though they are simple but they're very effective! Good chapter!

Good chapter. And now they are off to france. Quick question, is this a DescoleXLayton fic?

Great start! Cracked up at the line 'Why don't you try having a stable relationship with just one person' so funny!

I really like the OCs!

I honestly loved this story. It was truly a pleasure to read. Yes, I think you should write a sequel. This has been one of my favourite Jean Descole fanfics!:)

Wow. This fic was pretty awesome. I'm on the list of people who vote for a sequel! I usually don't like OC's, but I liked Bradley. I would like to see how he fits in a criminal life.

I would also like to know if Layton knows his identity. You seemed to have left that out. I'm not sure if Luke was joking, knew more than the Professor, or if they all knew.

Don't leave a cat hanging!

~The Little Catgirl

I have only just read the whole six chapters after finding a link on deviantART to it, and I love it! It's amazing. I love the way you write, the way you portray the feelings of Descole. I would love a sequel!

My deviantART account is SaRaH-lAyToN

I would really appreciate a sequel, it was an excellent story. If you do decide to make a sequel, could you make it a Layton and Descole pairing story? If that's not too much to ask. I just think there aren't very many of those.

This is very entertaining, please continue.

I love this and unlike the other reviews I can't say anything other than that. I just really love this you haven't any idea. ;;;;

On a side note, by Simon, are you referring to Simon in Curious Village? I loved Simon and the idea of Descole and Simon being related is just adorable. akjdfhjadg

I am eager to see if just Luke knows that he is descole or if they all know.

Also, Descole's behavior and thought processes make sense and are developing in a logical, natural way.

No typos that I can see and the paragraphs aren't too long and confusing.

Eager to see how this develops.