Rewatching B5 and found this. Makes my heart happy. Well done!

A must for all Babylon 5 fans who wished for a satisfactory conclusion to the Marcus Cole and Susan Ivanova story, which can be enjoyed without having read the original JMS short story set before it.

Just re-read this story again its still awesome.

When the epilogue to Marcus's life was published by JMS, many were disappointed in the strange and evocative nature of the piece. I'm glad to see a different view in this story. Everyone deserves a happy ending.

wonderful,

It was the missing part we needed :-)

Wow... great story, thanks for writing it. I really dont read often good M/I Stories, and this one is a good one! Its really realistic how Susan acts after her ressurection.

And its really cute how this relationship grows! Thanks for writing it!

And sorry for my bad english, but my native language is not english!

Awesome! This answers so many of the questions & things that worried me at the conclusion of JMS's story. Very well done. Thanks!

That was very well done! I especially liked the reactions of the Rangers devoted to Anla'shok Na Ivanova (The original one)!

This was both a beautiful fix to some of the problems I had with the original story, and an extremely well-written and wonderful continuation. Thank you; and please do consider writing more I/M fics - I really, really enjoyed this. {warm happy smile}

hey :)

I really liked this. Wish I could read the story it is based on, but it seemed to make enough sense. The dilemmas were interesting and well worked through. The only criticism I have is that the ending seemed a little abrubt. Or else too contrived... perhaps the "six months later" bit would be better expanded and fleshed out as an epilogue, rather than a conclusion. Just my thoughts, anyway ;)

sharon, i love this as I do all your stuff, so glad you are posting to

Oh that was *good*! I never got to read JMS story in Amazing Stories Magazine, hopefully someday but until then this did quite nicely!

I loved it, beautiful

You found some of the problems I had with JMS leaving the Amazing Stories story the way he did. Giving Susan her memories back was a very good solution. I thought the story got a little rushed towards the end-it felt like you changed your mind about a few plot points midway through. I think this is a very good story-just needs a little polish. A few less ! in conversation, for example, and tighter paragraphs. But overall, I really enjoyed it.