That was beautifull . Very well written ( Mitsuko's voice is so well done ) .Good job , keep it up !
lazyass out !

There was just something about the style of writing that just didn't appeal to me. Also, I didn't care for the characters much either and I usually like the main character "Shindo," not this time though. Sorry.

This was so... lovely? (In its own way.) Eh, I'm still not sure what would be the right word. I like stories about Hikaru's relationship with his mother, and this, rather realistic, was one of the best I've read.