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Koko chapter 12 . 4/4/2012 Love it! Update soon Please! |
Jane-E-Kirsted chapter 12 . 2/27/2012 Love love love it! Very cute...the only thing I would say is to be aware of your tense...it goes in between past and present sometimes. Otherwise this was wonderful :) ~jane |
threewordseightletters chapter 12 . 12/26/2011 woooo! they're finally a couple :3 Loved the chapter update asap :) |
myjumpingsocks chapter 12 . 11/24/2011 That was fantastic, adorable, and too cute for words! Their talk was well written I found and them being together is even cuter! On a completely unrelated note, do you have a tumblr? I'd love to follow you! |
SmilingAtTheTv chapter 12 . 11/23/2011 Aww, that was so cute and was really well written, well done! i'm glad you're back and writing again, can't wait for the next chapter! Update :) |
GingerFlight chapter 12 . 11/23/2011 Oh my gossshhh, this chapter was so cute! When I saw you updated I was so flipping happy. I've missed this story. :'3 It's not a very complex story, just a fairly simple one, but I think that's what makes it so endearing. Well, that and the dialogue. And the Channy cuteness. Gaah, I just love love LOVE this story. And he said he loved her! I almost exploded with joy when I read that. Oh, and cracked up so hard when Chad said "It'll be as easy and fast as a fat kid gobbling down cake." I know the moment was very serious and such, but I couldn't help it, that was just so funny! Haha, I love how you include stuff like that in there. xD And awwwwh, they kissed again! Not once but twice! Sha :'D Well, great chapter! I can't wait for the next update! I don't want to rush you, because I know when I get rushed I get all stressed, but... I do hope you'll be updating soon. c: And I'm going to try and get around to reading your other stories, too. :D Keep up the great work, hun! ~Ginger |
DeathDaisy chapter 12 . 11/23/2011 wooha! i can certainlysay that i loved this, it is a reeeealy great thing, really awesome |
LiveLaughLovePeaceChocolate chapter 12 . 11/23/2011 You don't like it? I loved it! Stop putting yourself down! |
elflood37 chapter 12 . 11/23/2011 Aww, they're so cute! Channy's so adorable, right? I love the way you do POVs. I haven't seen very many other authors that can switch so quickly and still manage to not confuse everybody. Only thing is, I really want to stop here, because I've never really liked stories after they get together. It's the climax of the story, you know? I can't wait to see the way you do it; you've been doing so well! And don't worry about disappointing anyone, the story is really nice and can keep up. I'll be checking out your other stories! :) |
storiesandstuff chapter 12 . 11/22/2011 Aaaaw, how cute(; sonny and Chad are always adorable together, & I love the name finnick. It's so cute(; and it reminds me of the hunger games, which I love too, |
GingerFlight chapter 11 . 10/9/2011 Ah, I'm so sorry that this is such a late review! D: I've been so incredibly busy with schoolwork and extra-curricular activities that I really haven't had time for anything on here. And then I was going through my e-mail just awhile ago, saw the story alert for this, and was like, "What? She updated? When was this?" So... yeah. I'm sorry. :C Anyway, on to the actual review. When I saw this was in Selena's POV, I seriously spazzed out. I don't think I've seen many stories that have her point of view, so that's awesome. Very original, m'dear. ;) I laughed so much while reading this chapter. It was just so hilarious! Haha, figures that Chad would make Selena dress up like a prostitute. One of my favorite lines: I barely fit in the car because of his enormous ego. Oh my gosh. xD That was way too funny. Ooh, and then Chad's comment about how the TV NEVER lies also cracked me up. Along with when he said, "Okay, fine, just ruin the Disney magic and the hope of millions of kids all over the world." Hahaha x3 Gah, I love Selena's matchmaker-ness. And how she got them to do a double date. I'm so eager to see what happens in the next chapter with Sonny and Chad's talk. I wonder what Chad told Finnick about Sonny? Oh, and Finnick seems like such a sweet character here. c: Well, as usual, great chapter! And update really soon, please! :D |
SmilingAtTheTv chapter 11 . 10/8/2011 Hahaha, that was sooo good :D I loved it ! It was really funny at the end... but a little awkward with chad and sonny :P I loved it and it was really well written :D I loved it :D Update :D |
Guest chapter 11 . 9/28/2011 Good job I really like what you Are doing with the story! Please update soon! :D |
JustMeMarissa chapter 11 . 9/28/2011 Hahahaha, loved the last part: "It's beautiful, isn't it?" Sonny continued admiring the beautiful masterpiece of the sky. "Very," Chad agreed. "Reminds me of you." "Excuse me?" With that comment, I felt a rush of accomplishment. "Um, what happened? Where am I? Where are you?" Chad acted clueless, but it doesn't fool me. awesome :) update soon please :) xx Maya |
myjumpingsocks chapter 11 . 9/27/2011 That was good! An outside perspective that agrees with the readers is always cool. Can't wait for more! That ending left me excited to see what will happen! |