Cool chapter

hey! I know this post is really old and you may never answer, but I love you fanfic, and beg you, please! keep writing! its been 4 years since this note, and Im still waiting :c, I would love to know the end, I even made fan fiction of your fan fiction in my head but its not good enough D:
anyways, thanks for writing this and sorry for my bad English, its not my main language

Aww Cute ending! :)

Luffy isn't that weak! He should've been able to beat those punks in that alley! :(

This was an amazing story. I totally loved it! I am kinds sad that you haven't finished it, but I know how yoqu feel with the fanfsom wand stuff-my sister and I are kinds falling out right now during the battle of marinefold... but that's beside the point. I really enjoy these well written longer stories because they have more charecter and stuff. I have to say that you are a really good writer, and I REALLY hope you get the inspiration to finish it (I would suggest listening to all the opening music together on youtube, the songs are big memory and emotional links for me), so I will be waiting. Sadly, I have no idea what you should do for the presents, maybe find an authors cheat to get around it.
Thanks for the amazing story,
Tydolt99

please continue soon, I really like this story!

This is an amazing story! It's not finished though? -_- fml I love it and it is one of my favourites on fan fiction please finish it! :D

XD hope u update soon! XD its so awesome.

This story is SO GOOD! I can't wait to see what happens next!

awh! If I had to buy Zoro a gift I'd get him a green lightsavor xD that just seems perfect xD

I love this story .

I like this . Lol I thought they cut Luffy's manhood off I was like WHAT?!

Glad they didn't that would be wierd ;s Anyways I love how you made Ace and Shanks .

I can't wait to see what happens next! I've really enjoyed this so far keep up the good work :)

The last two lines feel nostalgic to me. They remind me of when Luffy was breaking down at Amazon Lily after Ace's death, thinking he was alone but Jimbei reminded him that he still has his friends. Makes me quite happy for you to have included something like that, if you did have intentions on having people think that.

Son. Of. A. Bitch. Ace better live through this. Or things will happen. Very bad, very painful things.

You in college now? xD
I'm sad that this isn't finished, but I understand. T.T
Update when you feel that you can...if you will...
-SITC