Oh my!
I think Elder Thomas and me were making the same kind of whimpering-cheering noises!
And Arnold just retconning Leviticus is a genius move. "I meant the mechanics are different"! I just can't.
Arnold, you sneaky, loveable prophet.

Such a cute story. I'm glad the other Elders were supportive. I just thought you'd go deeper into the aftermath of Kevin and the general, because you seemed to build that up in the first chapter.

Thanks for sharing this newest of testaments. Now I'm sure to not have a spooky hell dream tonight.

Oh. I absolutely love this so far.
Somehow especially Elder Thomas being supportive and watching the love drama like a soap opera.
Very well written too.
I'm trilled to read the next chapter soon.

R

This fanfiction was well-presented. The use of Arnold's point of view in this fanfiction was well-picked. The writing itself is brilliant as well as the plot. This was one of the best fanfictions, this even converted me to ship McPriceley. Thank you for this.

Wow this story was awesome! And when I read that end part, I laughed, because they can actually finally get married and the ending was just so fluffy and you're an amazing writer and squeeeeeeee... Too many McPriceley feels here. Love it!

Arnold Cunningham, truly the author of the next Great American Novel.

That was incredible! I love your use of POV, and it was so sweet! Thanks for this beautiful fic! :)

I really love this story, so sad that i discovered it all late but wow, it was amazing, it tugged at my emotions so many times, and I so love how adorkable Arnold is

and for some reason this quote has given me so much hope for my gay friends: "Maybe Heavenly Father isn't the sick, twisted asshole in this equation. Maybe the church is. Because this..." Kevin tilted Elder McKinley's face up towards his and placed a gentle kiss on the corner of his lips, "...This is too beautiful to be wrong. Ryan... please tell me you see that. Please."

You are an absolutely FANTASTIC writer. The way the plot came together, and how in-character the characters were...it was professional quality. I'm really impressed. It was also really entertaining!

This has to be the best thing I have read on ! Not even joking! The use of POV was absolutely amazing (I sound like my lit & comp teacher)!

This Is flawless! :D

Such an amazing writer :)

Just amazing! :D

Wow i really like this story, here is watermellon!

About a week ago, I discovered the wonders of the world of fanfiction. About a week ago, I became a little (as in completely) obsessed. Today, I decided I needed to show my appreciation for your writing.

You are absolutely brilliant (BRILLIANT!). Your writing is just so perfect, all of it. And 'No Exit'? Oh, the angst! _ I don't know what it is, but whatever you're doing that makes you write so well... it's working. I could never write this well. You handled Arnold's voice in here so well (just like him, really). Most of the time, I find McPriceley rather annoying (at least the fluddy ones), but if you couple it with drama and angst, I'm beyond happy. I truly hope you end up making a living out of your writing, because this can certainly get you places. Keep writing.

This is so good you have to keep writing!

Wow. Amazing on every level. GO MCPRICELY! Wonder how Andrew and Rory would react to all the McPricely fanfics, lol...

*hands watermelon* here you go! Now for the review!

AMAZING! I always love to find a good story to read during the school day so I can sneak glances at it on my phone while in class and this story was perfect for that! I love how Arnold makes everything better in the end. The angst was perfect but not too much and you just did splendidly (I don't even know why I used that word) this is just amazingly fantastic. Truly something incredible. I wish there were more McPricely fics like this out there. This is just so awesome I... ugh! Okay, I'll stop XD

P.S.: I'm wondering who that other person McKinley slept with was... *wink* *wink* Kevin better not find out XD