Nicely creepy. The incoherence of it fits Chrona's madness well. Now we can add sexual abuse to the long list of Medusa's crimes against Chrona and humanity. (Unless I'm misreading it, but I think that was the implication. Wouldn't put anything past her.)

Yes!

I love it!

It was a little confusing, but that just added to the effect of the madness! Some awkward bits, but Chrona has had a harsh childhood...

Chrona is my favorite character. I call her/him Machroni. Sometimes just Chroni.