Love it, hope you continue it!

J'ai adore. Une suite?

This was a really great two chapters :)

Love it! Ever consider continuing?

Rofl! OMG, that was so great. I swear I laughed for a whole minute- loudly- at the "Babe, I don't know what you are saying… but god do you sound sexy" part. My husband was staring at me like I'd grown another head.

"Babe, I don't know what you are saying… but god do you sound sexy."
*nods* Yeah, it be like day sometimes. :3

Have you thought about doing a companion fic to this where you explore a kink Vaako has? You've certainly captured Riddicks (I can totally imagine him with a language kink) but I'm curious as to what Vaako's might be...

very nice, and you did good with the plot that snuck in lol love how complicated and easy their relationship is and i'd love to see more of this

I cannot believe it! You guys wrote the second chapter! XD And my stupid e-mail didn't notified me D:

Anywho I love the chapter! And its the first story with mulit-chaps too! Vaako was just so damn hot in here. Ugh I don't even know where to start. Lets just say that the whole thing was blazing! /

Oh and the Alpha! XD I swear, I love those dogs! I want one of my own. It had me laughing when I read wat happen to the metal. Priceless. I believe the blame could be put on Riddick for not taking them off his lover XD

And the whole leaving a mark. So deep. I felt bad for Vaako because of that. The whole time I was thinking "It's okay cuz you have Riddick now and not that women." TT

Again, AWESOME! lol

Very nicely done.

THAT was fabulous. I like how you cycled through Vaako's emotions, and make the sex a secondary focus, rather then the first.

I /wish/ I'd been able to read this when I first got the notification, but I had to get up, and run around for fourteen hours, so Instead of reading it, I pined about it for the rest of the day. But it was worth the wait! I adore your writing. You do it so well~

Yep I love it! Perfect smut/tease/violence ratio yet again! And i do love the bit with the hellhound melting his arm piece and jumping him! ;)

YES! Another Ridko story!

I love the idea. Thank you David and your beautiful mind! I wonder if Riddick ever heard another lanuage before... I can totally understand how he feels XD And Vaako! Holy shit!

In your other story you made him all angsty because it was a onesided thing. But here! He has life! He fights and he acts and their hated moments...*blushes* I could totally see everything you were writting.

So the reason as to why Vaako was sort of ignoring Riddick was cuz he was learning a new lanuage and of course, time makes the heart fonder. XD Just wanted to make sure. Again, I LOVE IT!

Language kinks are always great to read. X3

XD Dedication, Vaako. That be what the man is made of. Pure awesome dedication.