Glad for an update! even thought it was short! What does Janos think he was doing? Please update ASAP!

Good so far. Please update ASAP!

As one of the only other people who seems to support this pairing, I say kudos to you for writing this. Don't feel bad about this being your first story, as it is of a higher quality than my stories were of when I began. So please continue writing as I am sure you will get better over time and improve. And I would like to read more...

I am especially interested in what is going to happen between Angel and Frost. Nothing good, that's for sure, but I am curious as to how it will all go down.

Great so far. Keep going!

Brilliant story! I love Emma and Sebastian being possesive over her. Your descriptions are great and I love where this story is going!

Keep going with it!

Terrific job for your first FF! Short but sweet. I agree, this couple doesn't get a lot of attention, but I think they're adorable You did a very good job and I'm looking forward to more.

Peace

EDITH