Omg , tat was a pretty cool continuation of tat chapter XD

Wow, it was hot and sexy all at the same time.

Flirty Step-siblings along with flirty Junpei.

Oh, how wonderful

I love the sexual tension between Hamuko and Minato. Along with the very flirty, sexy banter between Junpei and Hamuko.

Someone was going to break soon. XD

The way you portrayed both three characters was very realistic. Very adult.

I'd see Hamuko drinking some of Minato's tea, by the way. ;)

Yuki

good shit. insanely good shit. one thing i didnt like about shenjay's fic was that he kept stringing hamuko and minato about, this was pure awesome.

I liked it i really did. Loved the way u described minatos jelousy.

fail

*snort* This was pretty damn funny. Ah, if only the two MCs were in the same universe...

Thank you for sharing!

Wow, this's cool, man! :D

Btw, can I translate it into Indonesian? I need your permission :)

Well, keep writing!

...

Signed out,

Miharu Koyama.

Note : Fave!

I like it. I enjoyed reading it and there's nothing wrong with your writing. Actually putting the coffee or tea line in the end was much better than the original 'you love me line'.

I didn't like your weirdness... I LOVED every single bit of it! It was a very nice side chapter to Fool's Tournament. I f you can continue this,then please do mate!

Actually,you're writing isn't bad(Even though it's a little short).

But i'm much more worse...i haven't written a single fic yet!

Shioko-chan

I loved it 8D Oh man I love how you write. I gotta pimp this in my next chapter! Thanks for writing tris, dude.

me:minato dont you think that really sucked?

minato:yes yes it did it sucked so much it should be destroyed by...

me:by?

minato:ARMAGEDON

glass breaks

me:SHIT IM GET THE FUCK OUT OF HERE!