That excuse of only being able to seal the Nine Tails into a baby is bs. If that were true, explain why Mito and Kushina were able to have him sealed into them. It is not just your story that I have issues with that use that same line, I just wanted to point that flaw out to you. Otherwise, I have liked this story so far.

Hi please add Temari,Ino,Sakura,Yugito,Kin,Karin,fem Haku,Kurenai,Anko,Yugao,Shizune and Tsunade thanks warenn55

This is an amazing story, im a bit sad you kind of left it but if your reading this then i hope you come back and finish this already great story. Fanfics like this make me actually want to write a story of my own, if i wasnt to lazy i probs would of.

This is amusing

Actually, Naruto is younger than Sasuke. It doesn't make sense to him 15. And how can you blame other authors for not correctly indicating Naruto’s age when you yourself incorrectly indicate. Shit piece

this story is really good and i hoped to read more chapter.

Fuck you bitch

Also it really irks me that your writting style is the complete opposite of the regular writing where this is "talking" and this is 'thoughts'
It is really confusing so bye... I was interested but when i saw your writing style i just got confused beyond measures

Hey review below mine pls do check your grammar.. I dont understand a single thing you wrote.

sasuke was borned then kushina and sasukes mother were talking about sasuke and Naruto be friends after Naruto is born you also see a baby sasuke in the scene

Okay, reading a story with swapped quotation marks for speach and thoughts is super weird. Every time one of those shows up I need to consciously correct myself on what it means. I hope I get used to it and that doesn't screw me over in other stories.

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Hmmmm i hope update soon

Anyone else think that Xenovia was the OG Earth-chan? xD
Also, Raynare best girl!
And I don't like how Sona is gonna make Issei join the Angels if she continues the way she does now. I love Sona, but still. anyways, good chapter!

Have to ask, is Fem!Haku in the harem? Or Kin Tsuchi? And how is Tenten taller when Naruto's 15 and she's currently 13 and a half? Damn Naruto's stunt growth from lack of healthy food...