| Reviews for Stop The Future |
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SplitPersonaliti chapter 32 . 1/16 I really enjoyed this story so far, hope you come back to it. |
Guest chapter 3 . 12/12/2019 Making kurenai his sensei just turned me off the entire fanfic |
Roberto Pelotudo chapter 2 . 12/5/2019 Leí hasta el segundo capitulo y ya no puedo seguir mas, hay demasiadas cosas que no tienen sentido. Un instructor de la academia trata de matar a Naruto, el "examen" tiene preguntas que son extremadamente basicas; "¿Cuales son los 5 elementos?" Es en serio?, esas preguntas son algo que incluso un niño civil al azar sería capaz de responder. Leí algunas de las reseñas y vi algunos horrores que ni siquiera quiero imaginar. Suerte con tu historia pero que sepas que no tiene sentido. |
Lerris chapter 1 . 11/13/2019 The writing quality could be improved. You wrote, "It was a wonder sometimes how much time he had while the world went to disaster. Almost endless time, while he ran from their eyes. From town, to town, to eventually a remote island far from the eyes of the Elemental Countries. He had to even run from his last ally, all to not hear the Uchihas kill him. Kakashi Hatake and the rest of them stayed in his heads All because of the last two Uchihas. Which is why every day for the last five years he trained and trained until he became completely strong. Completely strong. And be stronger in areas that he could cover." That could be written as, "Hour by hour, day by day, month by month, year by year he ran. He was the mouse in a maze, always looking for a way out, a way not just to survive, but to win. His last allies were dead, though not in vain. In the last five years he had become impossibly strong, but more importantly he had found the way out; the way to win. It might yet doom the world, but then that was already a done deal. It was time for a new one, no matter the cost." Basically, just reread your work, trying to figure out a way to phrase things more naturally, maybe with fewer words, making sure that change follows change, and everything is consistent within whatever framework you have. |
Ferocious Nightfury chapter 1 . 10/10/2019 That's it? Those are all his powers? That sucks... what about six paths sage mode? Lava release? Boil release? Acid release? All five nature chakra manipulation? Yin yang release? Bijuu mode? You haven't really made him that powerful. You just gave him some other powers and practically nerfed him. He has achieved nothing in five years in comparison. |
lalalamb chapter 32 . 9/18/2019 if the kyuubi's chakra still exist wouldn't it just grow, however slowly, and formed into kurama again, similar as to when bijus die and their chakra gathers elsewhere (perhaps to territories where they are the most strong) to slowly revive themselves |
Silver chapter 3 . 9/1/2019 This may seem like a stupid question so don't take it offensively but... Why not just make them a search and destroy team? I think the roles would be pretty obvious |
dragonfox123 chapter 1 . 7/24/2019 Interesting chapter and plot and idea |
BlueMapple chapter 9 . 7/5/2019 Honestly, Naruto's attitude towards Kurenai was disgusting. Who does he think he is ? Eventhough he has returned in the past, nobody knows it. Also he is, in their eyes, just a new genin and he doesn't really seem to have understood this fact. How is it that he can literally force Kurenai to accept a grade A mission with a genin team and nobody says anything? It's insubordination ! He is a genin, she is the jounin, he shouldn't have had a say. Returning to konoha was the right choice instead of playing the hero. She shouldn't have let him do what he wants. She should have brought him back to Konoha. He would have been reported for openly disobeying his superior and almost killing his team on a suicide mission. Does he really think that Kurenai would have survive ? Even Kakashi, an elite, could barely fight him ! She would have been crushed ! And all the rest of the team would have died with it. Naruto has no sense of reality. He wants so much to recreate events that he doesn't understand that he is playing God and that sooner or later people around him will pay the price. |
Ricky chapter 13 . 6/14/2019 I’m glad I dropped this story to much was focused on other characters and you tended draw out situations longer than they should, No way shape or form so I see ten being a better replacement than Haku even if your trying to be different than most stories. In terms of the pairings again your just trying to be different and because of that the characters don’t match up with each other very well are just forcing it. I mean naruto and Temari? Please talk about differences in character. Kiba Sakura forced, ten ten and lee forced, you might as well have left Naruto in team 7 if hinata isn’t going to be a love interest. Nothing wrong with making different pairings BUT you have to make it where the characters connect with one another and see how their personality come together. All the characters in your story are similar to cannon so them being in relationships doesn’t add up well. I get your trying to be different with your story but just cause you make changes here and their without adding significant change in the characters and situations than it’s pointless. No offense but I’m glad that it seems that your dropped this story. |
DarksiderForever chapter 6 . 5/23/2019 easier ways to break saskue out of his bullshit |
EeveeTheImmortal chapter 32 . 2/27/2019 *SCREAMING IN IMPATIENT* |
EeveeTheImmortal chapter 17 . 2/25/2019 #666 I just had to do it before someone else |
InfinityMask chapter 14 . 2/24/2019 Lol! Ohhh this best chapter from 14 chapter! Haha |
Guest chapter 7 . 1/2/2019 U jave not been reading manga properly~ Hinata has two releases : believe it or not, she has fire style and lightning style |