| Reviews for Kekoa |
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  Guest chapter 12 . 6/14/2019 Haha haha tbat end my god i love it, my face spit ti a wide smile. Thank you i needed that today. |
 leahk80 chapter 12 . 1/19/2019 Awesome! |
| Killmyaccount17597 chapter 12 . 2/6/2018 Lol. Love it. The last line is priceless. This whole story rocked. |
| Guest chapter 9 . 7/29/2017 Well that wouldn't of actually been allowed to happen so this was not focused on steves as a seal but about the team digging in to HIS NAVY mission and then going in as if they were seals when they are not and would get arrested for that |
| Guest chapter 3 . 7/29/2017 They shouldn't be digging in to were steves going they have not been told for a reason how bout they do their damn jobs and let steve do his |
| Guest chapter 12 . 6/27/2017 Not bad classified mission but 5 0 knew about it in order to grt out and help on a mission they shouldn't of known about and wouldn't of been allowed to be involved in as they are NOT seals |
| rosayago65 chapter 12 . 1/24/2017 I found this story and read it in one day. You're a great writer. I love Steve in SEAL mode but I do love him with the child. Love the last line. I know you wrote the story some years ago and it's a bit late for posting a review but I had to do it just tell you how much I enjoyed the whole plot and the way you write. Awesome! |
| gabobbi chapter 1 . 6/23/2015 Great, truly GREAT story.. |
| Skimball4 chapter 12 . 4/18/2015 Loved the last line! I have been binge reading all of your stories just like I've binge watched all 5 seasons of the show. Please keep writing...you are a great writer! |
| weemcg33 chapter 12 . 4/13/2015 Lmao, loved that last line. This was truly amazing, and I'm totally shocked that Steve wasn't injured once throughout but it had plenty of action and fluff where little Ali was concerned. Awesome story! |
| CelicaChick chapter 12 . 12/29/2014 Best action story ever! The relationships I the story was beyond words. I loved every word of this story! |
| iboneki chapter 12 . 12/5/2014 Oh, man, I need more recalled!SEAL!Steve in my life. Also savingkids!Steve. This is a gem. |
| lafemmefantome chapter 12 . 11/12/2013 This story was just priceless. I've been working my way through your stories and simply put, you've done an excellent job. I really wish you would consider self-publishing a collection of them. Maybe a fanzine of sorts? Just a thought :-) |
| steverfan chapter 1 . 2/12/2013 Great SEAL story for Steve,and he is fantastic with the litlle girl. Enjoyed your story ,felt like I was in the jungle with the team. |
| HeartsDragon chapter 12 . 8/16/2012 Brilliant story! I love Steve with kids he's adorable! Ali was so cute throughout the story and the ending was fantastic! :) |
