It would be rude to not leave this beautiful story with a review. I enjoyed it greatly. The characterization was spot on and it was very believable. Thanks for such an enjoyable read.

This was absolutely lovely! Great work! :D Now to read the sequel XD

Peace Out! _

Excellent characterization, humor, and sexiness! Keep it up.

aww~! 3

Erik isn't Polish... He's German. o_0?

Oh wow...I've read alot of this type of stuff, and I am impressed with the freshness of this! I love how you made Erik the dominant one still...even if he wasn't "technically" the dominant one. And it's totally realistic that he'd be like "what, boyfriends? Nope." At least for now. Well done.

Did you have to end this? Did you really, really have to end this though? It was just so amazing, I was so sad when I realized that this was the end and there were no more chapters! I have to say that I'm so glad that you kept the two of them true to their characters, Charles being beautifully naive, about certain things, and Erik being devastatingly confident, yet somewhat vulnerable at the same time. This story just...it is the embodiment of everything that Cherik should be. This was lovely, absolutely lovely. Thank you so much for writing it.

Now that is a bit of a surprise.

Not the sex or that they'd go there again, but the beautiful metalwork Erik made of the headboard.

The beauty in that very damaged soul coming out around Charles and expressing itself in a visible manner.

There's the love story...not the sex, but how they bring out the spiritual and emotional beauty in each other.

Oh, love that last line from Charles!

Excellent.

Oh, oh.

It made me smile and wince and feel the tiniest bit of satisfaction for Charles after Erik's abrupt departure last chapter.

in the days when kissing was the destination, not the appetizer

What a wonderful line. Actually haunting for we mature readers as we recall those days.

Really nice.

I always feel sorry for Erik and never more than in the last bit of this chapter. Such a sad man. You captured it perfectly.

Well, golly, I am assuming there's a second chapter!

Cause if there's not ... well I would be frustrated too.

Good start.

Good characterizations on the 4 characters, especially Charles and Erik!

They really are the perfect couple.

Does anyone blame Mitzi for being half in love with him?

Erik, you rotter.

Of course, I am biased. But the more I think about it, the more I think you're right - right around here is when they started up with one another. So as they were recruiting new mutants - sharing a bed in the red room, arm around the shoulders in the taxi - they'd already started going there...