| Reviews for Do Friends Become More |
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  Guest chapter 7 . 2/8/2019 this is one of the most ridiculous fanfic i have ever read |
| AAA chapter 7 . 2/4/2015 WTF. this is the end ? FUCCCCCCCCCCCCC... TU HISTORIA SE FUE AL CARAJO CUANDO HERMIONE ENGAÑO A HARRY QUE PERRA ... |
 JazzGirl123 chapter 7 . 10/10/2011 Not the best but sweet. |
| JazzGirl123 chapter 6 . 10/10/2011 OMFG |
| JazzGirl123 chapter 5 . 10/10/2011 Aw, poor Harry! Well, Rita Skeeter's about to have a cow. |
| JazzGirl123 chapter 4 . 10/10/2011 Drama! |
| JazzGirl123 chapter 3 . 10/10/2011 Yes you do Harry. How rude, Draco! Loved it! |
| JazzGirl123 chapter 2 . 10/10/2011 Gossip girl anyone? |
| JazzGirl123 chapter 1 . 10/10/2011 Short but a good start. |
| DarthMittens chapter 7 . 9/7/2011 Hey there, You had good plot and story progress, the only problem were the grammar and spelling errors. I'm not trying to flame, please don't take it that way, this is just constructive criticism. You'll get more readers and reviews if you just have your work beta'd. Hopefully seeing how your grammar and spelling are corrected will make you better as a writer. Once again, your story and plot development are great, you're just lacking a bit in the English department... Thanks for sharing your story with us and please don't let my review discourage you in any way! I really hope to see more from you! -DarthMittens |
| flipperjolt chapter 4 . 7/25/2011 Oh what a tangled web we weave when we practice to deceive! OY what a dilemna Harry has on his hands! Can't wait for more! |
| SarahD.Scott chapter 1 . 7/25/2011 I love your story so far can't wait for the next update! :) there's only one thing I find a little confusing...If Harry, Ron and Hermione are in their 6th year than why are Fred & George still at school? Aren't they 2 years older than Ron? Just found that a little confusing ;) |
| starboy454 chapter 5 . 7/19/2011 ron needs to go away harry and hermione need to be together |
| BlackWerewolfOfPurpleRoses chapter 5 . 7/18/2011 Awesome chapter! Harry's reaction to Hermione's and Ron's kiss was perfect! Can't wait to see what Harry does to win her back! |
| starboy454 chapter 4 . 7/17/2011 excellent story so far |
