This was okay, but you should consider getting into the habit of adding in detail and descriptions to give your writing more color. It's not really a story otherwise, more like a script. I'm also writing a story on Parasite Eve, so feel free to check it out. I'm not perfect, but I try to be descriptive, though sometimes its really hard. Just practice.

Ahhhhh! I LOVE IT! It was so touching! Is that the ending? Because if it is, I kinda wish it would never end.

That was a sad and beautiful interpretation re-enactment of the game. Wonderfully written and the chapter stayed true to the events and characters. I hope you write more PE stuff. I'm a fan of your works now! :)

Omg I forgot to add the story to my alert list so I didn't know it was updated! I loved this chapter. I absolutely adore this line:

"Kyle Madigan." I thought. That's the second time I've had to introduce myself to her, but I'm not lying this time.

I dunno why. It's such a simplistic line but the emotions really do weigh in that one line. It really made me think back to PE2, and the act Kyle had to put up. I think it's sweet because even though much of Kyle's history is shrouded, he seems to have been more open and trustworthy to Aya in T3B. :)

I don't even play Parasite Eve and I don't get what's going on... Still ._.

But, YOU'RE SUCH A GOOD WRITER! You should write more, seriously! No wonder you're so good in English... Above-averager. XD Continue I guess... Continue to your KyleXAya heart's content TvT

It will take a while for her to remember who she really is.

OMFG! I FREAKING LOVE IT! Please make more stories! I would love that.

Not bad, the more you practice, the better the story.

Short and simple, I like it. :) Thanks for writing the FIRST 3rd Birthday story. Kyle is a mysterious character indeed, and I was hoping to find out more about him in the game, but that didn't happen. His past is still blurry and although he seems to be on Aya's side (being engaged to her and all after all those years), we the players still can't assume that he's clean without a history.

Great job on your first story! Will there be a second chapter? Perhaps when the two meet and we get to know more about their inner thoughts?