Oh nooooo! Wow, that was really really excellent and sad.
Now I'm off to read The Taste of Life :)

Thank you so much for this little Oneshot! I like the way you described Tenzou with his longings for his senpai on the one hand but his endless patience on the other. It is what (to my mind) he would do due to such a situation. But what most startled me was the way you pictured Kakashi. It comes really close to the Kakashi I see in the Anime and the Manga. Always keeping his distance but at some times showing a tiny little bit of how much he cares for his loved ones. This really discribes a man who has seen lots of his friends die but nevertheless is human at all.
Also I love the 1st person point of view! It helped a lot to understand Tenzou.

As I said before: Thank you very much for this FanFiction! I have looked for something like this in a long time!

(And btw: They are my favourite pairing as well!)

This was rly good though i could cry right now xD Hope you'll do much more KakaYama !

No! Poor Tenzou! I kind of had a feeling there wouldn't be a happy ending to this, but I had a little hope. I'm usually not a fan of first person narrator and present tense, but you did an awesome job with it. The chaotic kind of way that Tenzou saw everything that happen and how his feelings were clear but not... sappy and overly romantic were a job well don on your part. I really, really liked this.

My goodness, I love this. I agree this pairing needs more love. This story was sweet and I thought at how you wrote this in a great way. You have a really lovely writing style which was nice to read.

I always get excited whenever I see someone has written a Kakashi/Yamato (Tenzo) story since they're so scarce. And I really enjoyed yours as well, especially liked the opening line that set up the rest of the story.

It was really a pleasure to read, and I enjoyed it immensely. :)

aw that was nice _ Thank you so much for writing this! KakaYama definitely needs more love TT

I loved this story. It was so incrediable. I usually don't like sad endings but I guess it apporiate for this story. Will you continue? Maybe a sequel. I hope so!

Realistic and sad, but I liked it nevertheless. Yamato definitely has a thing for Kakashi, but Kakashi is one of those that could go either way (even though we all want him to like men ;D Ah, fangirls). Every pairing needs some gloom fics. Although, some have way too many for their own good (cough) ObiKaka (cough)...Anyway, I'm surprised that this was all done in first person. You don't see that very often, and normally they aren't too good, but you've proven to be an exception. The first line to this story definitely catches the readers attention. Good take on what romance would be in the shinobi world. Well thought out I think. I mention this in every KakaYama story, but it's so true, I can't help it. You notice, that 9 out of 10 times, Tenzou gets wasted in fanfics? lol. It never gets old. For some reason, every fan pictures that being the way he confesses. I enjoyed the fact that Kakashi piggybacked him, although it brought to mind the whole Gai/Kakashi ride...(shudders and laughs at same time). Finally, I think you did a very good job with detail. You really thought it all out, the drunkeness and hangover I mean. For instance, the part where Kakashi bounces him up, and Tenzou ends up puking. And then taking the time to do the "drink...spit" number. I don't know, it was just a nice touch and image rather than the "Kakashi walked him home." Fin. lol. Great job. Hope you get more reviews.

Awww poor Tenzou. But wow! This is great! You're very talented! I hope to see more from you. :D

That was really amazing. Seriously, you're good, very good. You're writing has personality, you know? Anyways, I really liked reading this, I hope to see more from you!