Can you do a story where Connor and his older twin are watching tv before breakfast when Match and Connor sneak out of the mountain to go to a new toy store that they wanted to see and when they are done with the toy store Connor says that they should go to the Ice Cream store but Match thinks they should go back to the mountain before anyone finds out that they are gone but they start arguing with each other because Match knows they will be looking for them even though he wants to go to the Ice Cream store too so after of arguing with each other for a while Match then changes his mind and they go to the Ice Cream store when they almost there when they find Batman and Nightwing are blocking them from going anywhere and when Batman ask where they are going they tell him that they are going to the Ice Cream Store to get Ice Cream but the twins get upset when Batman tells them that they can't go to the Ice Cream store when they hear that they can't go they become upset that they try to walk around Batman but when Batman blocks thier way again they become really upset and they push on Batman legs to move him out of thier way but they can't get him to move because he's much bigger than them so they start to hitting that Batman legs and the twins notice that they are being picked up by Batman and Nightwing and the twins start struggling in thier arms trying to get free but when they see that they are going towards the Batmobile instead of the Ice Cream Store they struggle even more and they start to yell and crying and the next when the team was busy on a mission exempt for Nightwing and Robin and they are watching twins Lex Luthor try's to kidnap the twins and Lex Luthor arrives to the mountain but he didn't know that Nightwing and Robin where there watching the twins and after team and the Justice League finds out about what happened they have to make sure that the twins don't get taken by Lex Luthor and Superman is always keeping an eye on them to make sure that nothing happens to them and can you make it where Superman sees Superboy and Match as his sons please and Batman is the other father of the twins instead of Lex Luthor and can you make Superboy the youngest of the team and when Superman is busy he has Batman watch the twins because he knows that Batman won't let anyone hurt them and he lets Robin and Nightwing watch them too and Superboy and Match doesn't like it when Superman,Batman,Nightwing, and Robin to tell them want they can and can't do they especially doesn't like it when thier father says it and when they tell him no they get upset and takes off and most of the time only thier father is the one who gets them unless he's not there and Nightwing and Robin are Match and Superboy's big brothers and Match is older than Superboy but Match also younger than the team and younger than Nightwing and younger than Robin too and the twins are three years old and please please update soon I what to see what happens next. Thanks :)

The robins. Does Connor name one Damian?

Awsome! Plese update!

AHAHAHA I LOVED THAT! Oh I loved that so much, especially the part about not hating the color, that was the perfect Superboy line, gosh it reminds me of something I would say...
Keep up the awesome writing, can't wait to read more!

Wait a minute? What the h...? So, it was the first Robin in the first two chapters, but then you changed him to Tim in the third? That doesn't make any sense! You know that the first Robin, the original one, was Richie (Dick. I just like 'Richie' better as a nickname for Richard), right? And Tim was the copycat one (I never liked it when there were made more Robins). I think you just messed this story up. Because when the team was Miss M, KF, Aqualad, Superboy, Robin and Artemis, then Nightwing didn't exist yet. But in the first two chapters, you kind of made it seem like the Robin that you were talking about was Richie...

I like your writing very much so. Very creative, very inciteful. Yay Nightwing cameo Very happy Kitty here. Anywhosen, I really like this, and that's saying a lot considering that I don't usually read/watch anything that has Tim as Robin. *shrugs* I dunno. I've been considering rethinking that decision though. To not be biased an all. Anywhosen, this has definately pushed me closer to that, and this is very well done

I would like to ask you to continue. not sure if you're still writing it though.

richard grayson is actually the robin of the cartoon young justice. AND he was the one who grew up in the circus not tim. like the story though

This chapter was amazing. I cannot wait to read more. TimXSupey friendship is soo good. And haha supey and I like the same animal.

You're an amazing writer and are very creative.

SoubiXLoveless: You are so awesome :D

Actually, I'd just like to point out to everyone...before this chapter no name has been given. He's -Tim- been "Robin." So, her decision to make him Tim shouldn't be that big of deal. Keep in mind this is not your fanfiction, therefore any number of not agreeable things could happen. This is her choice. Interjected Tim (who IS the true member of Young Justice) into Earth-16's universe.

Don't like it? Don't read it. But for fuck's sake...stop pointing it out. She knows, thank you, move on.

I like this story. It's incredibly cute. Thanks for the update and hope to see a new one soon.

Kai

Mkay, this idea is adorable and I like it. Simple.

I also love the batfamily dynamic. It's just too cute to think of how Tim deals with all the fights between Dick and Bruce.

However, in the interests of continuity, I will point out a few things, some of which may have been mentioned earlier. The weird thing about the animated cartoon version of YJ is that Kid Flash and Robin are Wally West and Dick Grayson respectively, while in the comic they were Bart Allen and Tim Drake. For some reason, the creators decided that they wanted to use Wally and Dick rather than Bart and Tim. It might be because they decided to make YJ (in this universe) the first group of junior heros, so they used Roy, Wally, and Dick. Comic verse, these three (along with some others) form a group called the Teen Titans.

Now, if you simply decided to use Tim and Bart, that'd make a lot more sense, because YJ's Robin is a weird cross between Tim and Dick (Tim's more of a hacker, but Dick is the acrobat and the more likely to laugh at his enemies - although that's more of a Jason characteristic). But using Tim and Wally just confuses the hell out of those of us who know something of the comics. Because continuity wise, the ages just don't match.

There's also a weird sort of costume continuity that they aren't quite holding to, at this point. Because Barry Allen (The Flash in this YJToon universe) is wearing Wally West's Flash suit. While Wally's KF costume is a strange combination of his own and Bart's. Dick's Robin suit is closer to Tim's Robin suit (just before he becomes Red Robin and changes a few of the details).

That being said, the cartoon has made it very clear that Dick Grayson and Wally West are the Robin and Kid Flash in this particular iteration. Is it confusing as all hell? Yes. Do you have to change things? No, but you might want to acknowledge the fact that you're screwing with continuity. A lot of fans think that this Robin ought to be Tim Drake, because he acts a bit more like Tim (and you could get a lot of evidence toward that thought), but they've taken great pains to make him a fan of wordplay (Dick Grayson is famous for claiming that his 'chattiness' is all part of his charm) and hint that his style of fighting is heavily acrobatic, which is Dick's main distinguishing feature in the Batclan - he's faster and more agile. He also uses Escrima Sticks when in civilian clothes, which are Nightwing's main weapon. As for Dick not being a hacker, well, he's usually not given hacking equipment (part of the problems with being the Robin from the 1940s), so I'd say that's all creative license and an updating of his equipment to change with the times.

Just thought I'd give you some fair warning on how this might be confusing/maddening for your readers.

- Kirrae

u do know that dick is the yj robin right?

Um, well I totally didn't understand like half this chapter...

Love the chapter. You wrote it extremely well.

I'm just not sure if you know this or not. But, in the show Robin is Dick G. Not Tim.

Update soon!

nice chapter, can't wait to see more.