...and clive said that 'he can handle something like a cold' lol

That was a very cute story. I really love Clive even after I knew what his intentions were. He's definitely my favourite character followed by Luke.

LOL LUKE

the most crushable thing ever. if that makes sense

This story is like, so freaking adorable I was barfing rainbows!
I love how you made Clive his usual, cocky self and didn't go out of character. :3 And I especially love where he kisses Luke's forehead! This was just fantastic, I loved it!

-Pancakes

I read this story, loved it and didn't even know you wrote it, Mari! BRAVO!

Awwww so cute! I love it! U got the characters spot on especilly Clive. Thanku for writing it ~ Middy

OHMYGOD.

THIS IS SO ADORABLE I CAN'T EVEN-

/fangirls so hard

GGGGGG CLIVE. IS SO CUTEEE. I LOVE HIS 'I'M BETTER THAN YOU' PERSONALITY.

and the ending.

so ironic-

this reminds me of homestuck-

also constructive criticism. I think some parts don't need to be on a new line if it's the same speaker, like when Clive was telling Luke that he'd make the soup. Idek /nitpicking

BUT THIS IS SO CUTEEEEE can clive have my children please-

The fluff rocked

Such a cute story! Love it to pieces. You wrote it near flawlessly and it flowed really well. The end made me giggle out loud too :)

Lovely piece, good job!

um...I like the story and all but...It's flora. Not fiona