Mmmrrouwwff! (Translation: What the heck! (in a whinning tone.) You absolutely must go on - because that is not an ending and because it is sooo SOOO good! And even though I feel that Jess is too weak (I loved in the last chapter that he finally says that he doesn't deserve this (which is soo true) I love the tension and passion you've successfully created! It needs a conclusion at least - you owe not only the readers but the concept of this piece that much. It's so wonderful you simply cannot, CANNOT leave it so simply at a loss for words and satisfaction. Because everyone involved at this point (characters and readers) deserve some satisfaction!

Please consider another chapter, I implore you leave us not wanting?

Cheers, Jen

WOW.

*Sigh*

WINK.

*Sigh*

WOW.

I just can't wait to see how this wonderful, well written and perfectly blissful piece will play out. It's just full of angsty passion and it's marvelous.

Thanks, Jen

I like it. Please update soon!

Ah sorry it took me so long to review this chapter! Anyway, here I am!

Woof, I can feel the tension. Oh Rory, such a confused and conflicted girl. I understand her fears and worries, but I don't blame Jess for getting angry with her. Poor Jess needs a hug. I hope Luke turns around so there's at least one person on Jess' side. Jess has so many emotions going through him that I think he's going to burst soon.

Again, your writing is amazing. You have been on point, especially with Jess' character. I also admire the transitions and detail you add in the descriptions. It makes the story flow very nicely.

Excellent as always! :)

This story is SO GOOD. I especially liked this last chapter, Jess at the end was so cute. Can't wait to see where you go from here :)

I so love Rory and Jess, this story is so good and I can't wait to read more, please update soon.

Loved it again, I just wish they'd stop fighting and admit they love each other :)

You totally didn't ramble, it was well written and really sweet. I loved it, and I love the idea of the two of them being magnatized towards each other. So cute!

I like it a lot so far. There haven't been any really good new R/J stories in a while so I am pleased I found this. Ok I'm going to read the next chapter.

My two cents.

Excellent beginning, I really love this:

"Thus, he didn't care.

Let her sit there.

Staring."

It is very Jess and brings a smile to my face as I start reading this story.

This next quote literally took my breath away. Jess does indeed have more experience than Rory and you have beautifully captured the urge and want here.

"With her long fingers that he longed to feel on him, gripping him tighter and tighter as he made her crazy with desire and want, as he took her on a trip out of her comfort zone and into the allure of a world she'd never known."

"Geez, you've really been studying that brooding manual hard, haven't you!" - To me, this sounded a little OOC for Luke, especially coming out of the blue, but I might just be overly sensitive.

All in all, I think the first part of this (up until they meet) was fantastic. You write Jess very, very well. I almost wish you would have left it at that, not because the second half was bad (not at all), but to me it felt almost unnecessary. A little long(ish) maybe, but there were some very nice moments here as well. I was on the edge of my seat hoping like crazy they would kiss again, and was disappointed that they didn't.

That is actually one of the surest signs of a good story, that it makes me feel something. Very well done!

this is really really really good, Abbs. ;p You took out all the over-the-top stuff & it's just a knowing somber interlude between all the drama and what comes next. Really really good. )

Aw, now I want to give him a hug!

It was a very nice change from the last chapter: it was quiet, but still full of tension.

And I LOVE this line: "Rory wanted him, he could see that there; but she felt like she needed Dean, or maybe that Dean needed her."

Wait, wait, wait. They only made out, right? Because they seem oddly post-coitial, and you don't say anything out right here...

You made some very good points here, especially about Rory being largely at fault but everyone blaming Jess. Luke was harsh. I didn't like that. And I'm not entirely sure about whether things would get this physical between them right away, but altogether, it was very enjoyable to read.

First of all, I'm very happy you decided to continue this. Second of all, I apologise for the delay in reviewing, I was away.

Now. I already told you that you've got Jess down, but let me say it again: you write his frustration with Rory and himself fabulously. I really love his beating himself up over feeling this way about her. Also, the desire is palpable, and the final scene wonderful and very in character: Rory doesn't really know what she wants, but she cannot help herself around Jess, and I just really love the whole scene.

Yay for having a next chapter to read! Thank you!

Ugh, this story just makes me want to go back and rewatch all the old episodes of Jess&Rory. They really were a great couple. And you do a great job portraying them. Keep it up!